オリンポスの神々と7人の英雄 Article: Perfect

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Perfect

posted by NicoDiAngelo4

So this is my first try at a songfiction! Its Perfect, によって P!nk, and this is for all those Lalia/Thuke ファン out there! Constructive critism is appreciated:D

PERFECT
(THALIA'S POV)

I walked into the Artemis cabin, tired from a long game of capture the flag. I was going to go to ベッド when I noticed a packgage sitting on my bed. In neatly written cursive, it had the name タリア on it. Curious, I opened it and found an ipodの, ipod in it. I put in the earphones and started listening,

Dear Thalia, I know that によって the time あなた will be 読書 this, I will be long gone, but, the feelings are still there, so please....just listen to this for me...

Made a wrong turn, once または twice
The song paused and I gasped as I heard luke's voice.
When I was leading あなた and Annabeth to camp, I led あなた both into so many traps

Dug my way out of blood and fire
As fun as it was being on the runn with the two of you, we had practically escaped every possible monster...

Bad decsions, thats all right
I know it was wrong to give myself over to Kronos, but...

Welcome to my silly life
Honestly, do the Gods really expect us to lead a normal life? We're fricken demigods for Zeus' sake!

mistreated, misplaced, misunderstood
Iv'e always been treated horribly, take for granet, never taken seriously, and I am just so done with it!

"Miss, no-way-its-all-good"
but yet, whenever あなた come everyone relaxes a little, knowing that you've got everything under control

It didn't slow me down
When あなた were a tree, it was hard to keep going, but somehow i managed...barely

Mistaken, always secong guessing, underestimated, look im still around
Being a son of Hermes is hard, nobody takes me seriosly, nobody thinks that I can do anything, besides steal things, but I can do soo much もっと見る than that...

Pretty Pretty Please,
Dont あなた ever, ever feel,
Like your less than,
Less than Perfect
Thalia Grace, Daughter of Zeus, Lieutenant of Artemis, あなた are perfect

Pretty Pretty Please,
Don't あなた ever ever feel,
Like your nothing,
あなた are perfect, to me-
This honestly may mean nothing to you, but あなた are perfect

your so mean, when あなた talk, about yourself, あなた are wrong
Honestly, Thals, あなた put yourself at such low standards, but when are あなた going to accept that your pefrect?

change the voices, in your head, and make them like あなた instead
Again, あなた doubt yourself too much! あなた ARE PERFECT!

So complicated
Why does our relationship have to be so complicated

Look how big you'll make it
Your an immortal daughter of Zeus, you'll go down in history

Filled with so much hatred, such a tired game
I used to have so much hatred towards the gods, and I was just so sick of doing their dirty work, and not getting anything in return!

It's enough, iv'e done all I could think of
I was so sick of it I resorted to my lst option, which I'm not proud of...

Chased down all my demons
Personally, I think I made the right choice sacrificing myself for the gods...

I'll see あなた do the same
Thalia, please listen to me! I know Gaea is starting to rise! She will come after the most powerful half bloods, which means that she will come after you; as hypocrytical as this may sound, just say no...don't give in, no matter what she tempts あなた with, say no, please...for me?

Pretty Pretty please,
Don't あなた ever, ever feel,
Like your less than,
Less than perfect
It hasn't changed, あなた are still, and always will be perfect

Pretty Pretty please,
If あなた ever ever feel,
Like your nothing,
あなた are perfect, to me-
No matter what anyone says, to me, あなた will always be perfect.

Luke's voice paused, then said,
I know this won't mean much to you, Thals, but...I 愛 you

The 音楽 stopped and Luke's voice was gone, I tear dripped down my face. This was the Luke I knew. This was the real him. This was the Luke that I loved.

ala44, MaximumRide12 and 2 others like this

rapunzeleah123 Whoa......FRICKIN AWESOME!!!!!!!!! Constructive criticism: You may want to clarify that he's saying the words in bold, and the italics are the song. Obviously, most people know that song, but it's good to clarify just in case:) But other than that.....this is frickin amazing!!!!! You rock Haley! ;)

Starlight1o1 That was so amazing especially for your first songfic. Wait a second *Looks in a dictionary for the definition of awesome and finds your songfic there* secondly *Looks into a thesaurus for another word for awesome because people us that word too much* but hey it's true. I liked how you turned the song into a warning to Thalia. Also I liked how you included at the end that this was the real Luke since we didn't see much about what he was really like. Constructive critisim: You used the word perfect a lot but Luke was trying to get the point across and the song is called perfect so I think that should be okay. I think it would have been nice if you added a bit more of Thailia's thoughts to the songfic so we would know more about what she was thinking while the song was playing. Also in some places Luke doesn't really sound like Luke but we didn't get to know the real Luke so maybe that's what the real Luke sounds like. Seriously though I can't find anything critisize. It's just to good to find any faults. And yet again I have written way too much when I wasn't planning on doing. P.S. I would add you as a fan just because of how good this is but I already did a while back so I can't now. Also for this being your first sonfiction I'm speechless because of amazement (Not really because I just wrote all of that but you get what I mean... At least I hope you get what I mean and I really should stop writing right now...)

HecateA Wow... Just... Just wow... Aww... I feel sorry for Thalia all over again :( That was incredible, Nico! That was perfect! You nailed it! The warning was a brilliant idea, the song was perfect, and in the end that was so sad... That was great! I'll keep my eyes pealed just in case you write another one!

NicoDiAngelo4 Thanks so much everyone! Especially for the advice! i'm planning on writing/posting another songfic later, so I will try and imporve it! Thanks so much for the awesome commments!

Perseus54321 really good song fic but it makes me feel depressed, but I'm a depressing person anyways so it doesn't really matter.

NicoDiAngelo4 sorry it was depressing, and thanks?XD

Spikegilfer1997 Wow, makes me hate Luke way less for getting her killed, well your version of Luke anyways.

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jason

posted by i_luv_percy

Okay this is a book like the pjo series but instead of percy it will be Jason. If I get コメント then i might make it to a forum.

Chapter 1
Jason

I have never wanted to be a demigod. Especially for so long. I mean if あなた ever ask a demigod (if あなた ever meet one) since how long they have been training they might say since the were 12. The youngest at SPQR are probably seven. The oldest maybe 20. But I have been here since I was 2. I was even tested when I was two.Well I wasn't really tested. Lupa was about to kill me but I struck her with lightning and thought I had a good future as a warrior....

Another Percy & Selena vidio

added by Poseidon_3_PJ

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percy jackson

セレーナ・ゴメス

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Something I came across...

posted by babbytreegrowth

Okay so I was 読書 the Percy Jackson demigod files and I came across this. I'm not sure if あなた guys have already talked about this, but here goes...

All right, so I was 読書 the story about when Percy was playing capture the flag with Beckendorf, and they had that camouflage armor on. Well this is when the found the Ant 丘, ヒル and the Myrmekes.

Well Beckendorf got taken in によって the Mymekes, and so Percy got Annabeth and Silena to help him rescue Beckendorf. They found the head of the bronze dragon, soon to be Festus, and Annabeth got an idea. If they used the dragon, and found it's body, they...

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New フォーラ

posted by Emily_is_COOl

Okay! I have a new forum: The First Fan-Fic (The Son of Neptune)
But its on The Son of Neptune Book so can あなた check it out?
If not send me a PM and I will try to post it here too?

Here's the Link:

link

It may not be good but I try...
SO if あなた like PJoO and HoO 本 check it out and comment, coz I 愛 those!

So please check it out don't don't use language! I accept constructive critism!

I know あなた are probably like-WHOA-I don't care! If so just don't check coz I don't want あなた to be all angry and rude!

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Roman Info

posted by kokishka

Lately I've just been sitting around on my butt, so I decided I'd get up and write (actually, もっと見る like copy) a whole bunch of 名言・格言 from Percy Jackson & the Olympians. I'm not really organizing them, just pulling them out from ランダム books.
*WARNING* I cant remember if Im supposed to add this または not, but just to be safe, none of these 名言・格言 belong to me. They are all Rick Riordan's property and I am simply pulling them out of his 本 and posting them here.

"Roman," Annabeth said. "Those mosaics are about two thousand years old."
"But how can they be Roman?" I wasn't that great on ancient...

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Characters at ランダム

posted by partypony

Hi! I’m so bored right now. I remembered something my friend showed me (hi!) and I’d like to know what あなた guys think of it.
All credits go to her, ‘cause it’s her idea.

Quick! Name 12 characters from PJO または HoO!
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
8.
9.
10.
11.
12.

~~~
Answer these questions:

1)    Do あなた think 5/8 will happen?
2)    3 and 9 and 12 are in a 愛 triangle. Who do あなた think 3 will choose?
3)    Write a summary of a story that has 7, 10, and 11 in it.
4)    2 and 4 are fighting to the death. Who do あなた think will win?
5)    Do...

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Part Eight of the Somewhat Less important Chronicles of Elle Trick

posted by childofaeolus

こんにちは guys this chapter marks the beginning of the ロスト Hero at least the beginning of Camp Halfblood's influence in the ロスト hero. i have recently realized that I have gotten a fact wrong in one of my 前記事 but I suppose if it's my ファン fiction it doesn't really matter. So let's get to it.

Elle watched Annabeth, Butch, and three other kids crawl onto the 海岸, ショア of the lake. A very upset Will runs up and starts yelling at Annabeth.

Who is the enemy? Is it Butch または one of the other two boys?

I suppose it could be any of them.

Oh no, her comes the クイーン herself.

What is she up to now,...

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Part Six of the Somewhat Less Important Chronicles of Elle Trick

posted by childofaeolus

こんにちは guys personally the last one was my fav don't know which one was yours but I'm gonna try and keep getting better. Anyways this one hopefully will add a new aspect to Elle 一覧 of things to think about.
So lets get to it.

"Maybe Pollux would be better?" suggested Elle quietly.

"Why, I mean Butch is our best equestrian and he's pretty good in a fight."

"Well... um.... I suppose..., Oh whatever just pick someone else!

"Why?"

"Reasons..." grumbled Elle.

"Ooooh I got it, what about Will, he's got that nifty flying chariot, and he's not to bad in a fight, plus since あなた fight up close a long...

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Part Five of The Somewhat Less Important Chronicles of Elle Trick

posted by childofaeolus

Oh yay I'v been planning these scenes for a while now even before part one. I was originally gonna start here but I thought あなた guys might need to know Elle better. This one I think shows what I think are the true Colors（色） of one character we weren't to sure about.

"Annabeth please wait!"

"We've got to go see her now!"

"Aren't we supposed to get Chiron's permission first?" asked Elle, "It's not like あなた to not follow procedures."

"Hmmgh, I guess your right," sighed Annabeth.

"Of course I am now common!"

"Where to?"

"Where do あなた think?!"

7 分 later....

"And your sure that あなた saw him?"...

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Hints We Didn't Know Where Hints

posted by LinaHarrow

Okay so, before I begin this article, I would just like to say one thing. The タイトル is so totally awesome right? Amazing, catchy!? No? It's not? Yeah, I didn't think so either, it's okay.

Now to the point. In "The ロスト Hero" we meet new characters, tag along with Jason, Piper, and Leo on some cool adventures on their quest, and get to hear some stories we haven't heard before. But are some of these things not quite as new as they seem? I'm sure some of あなた have noticed it too. Here are a couple of things I've noticed that we came upon in other places in the Percy Jackson fandom as well as...

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Part two of the somewhat less important chronicles of Elle Trick

posted by childofaeolus

Hi I can see によって the fact that you're 読書 this that あなた probably were interested によって my first 記事 and probably wan to know; What happens next? Who is Elle's godly parent? Did Drew ever manage to wash all of the 食 out of her ears?! All important 質問 and as a matter of fact Drew still has a piece of コーン, トウモロコシ lodged in her ear. So to answer the other 質問 I will start where we las left off.

There was a collective gasp from the crowd of campers.

"What are あなた looking at?"

"You've been claimed!" 発言しました a camper.

"I've been what?"

"Your godly parent has acknowledged あなた as one of their...

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Part One of the some what less important Chronicles of Elle Trick

posted by childofaeolus

Sometime I feel that 本 are missing something that something is a particular character. I've been dreaming her up for about two years and she fits perfectly into the storyline of Percy Jackson's world. Sometimes she was a sister of an important character または just another halfblood. The godly parent was always switched but the girl never really changed. So now I know exactly who she is. I can't promise you'll like my 書く but I'll try.

Let's travel back in time a little. Just after the Last Olympian and right before Percy disappears good times. Meet Elle.

"What do あなた mean によって extraction...

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On the Run

posted by babbytreegrowth

This is my very first article.

My dream started like this...
"All right, I have an announcement to make."a woman said.
She was sitting at a 表, テーブル with two kids sitting across from her.
The girl, who looked about nine, looked up from behind shoulder length black hair and stopped feeding the toddler that sat 次 to her.
"Thalia, I'm taking あなた and Jason on a family vacation up north."the woman choked up saying "family vacation."
Thalia looked suspicious. "But あなた never take us on vacations"
"I know, but I wanted to take あなた to this cool place..." her voice trailed off and and she looked about ready...

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The Wrong Seventh

posted by partypony

I just want to write this 記事 so I can spread this message, 'kay?

Percy is NOT one of the seven of the prophecy.

There. I 発言しました it. For the quadrillionth time.

It's not that I don't want him to be one of them (in fact, I DO want him to be one of the seven), but RR 発言しました that Percy will play a major role in the series, but he won't be a central character. He also won't be one of the seven. I believe this. Percy has already fulfilled his prophecy in the 前 series, so it would be kind of repetitive of RR to make Percy as a child of the prophecy. Again. I read an 記事 that the seven can...

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There is a line between these two.........

posted by redhawks

Son of POISDEAN!!!!!!!!!

Ok people I'm apologizing in advanced if this is too short for you.

So there has been a lot of relentless arguging on what the POV(s) will be and I want to get all of the facts out in the open and seperate two things.

The two things that has to be seperated is the fact that people who say Percy will be one of the POVs または people who say that the POVs will stay the same as the last book. People who say Percy will have a POV are mostly saying that because they are hoping for that to happen not because they have facts to back their choice up. It is getting on my nerves how people are just making...

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So I noticed...

posted by HecateA

Since October 12 we've been booming with fans! (no booming isn't a word if you're wondering)

I really appreciate having new people with new ideas around. It's awesome! But I'd like to stop the party for a little while and talk to あなた guys about the rules we've set up here, just so あなた dont accidentaly step on someone's toes, または that あなた know to get off 'em.

1. ファン fiction is the first thing I want to talk about. ファン fiction is great, its amazing! But Amphitrite, who is a member here (everyone has probably read an 記事 of hers, または her fanfiction), set up rules for fanfiction, and just because...

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my versoin of how the last page of the son of neptune will go ... percy's piont of veiw

posted by bookeater

Annabeth was in serrious trouble now. The gaint was gaining on her. I tryed to run toward her but i was アナと雪の女王 either in fear または shock i dont know.

i watched the blade go though her.

Now i ran. I was fighting though crouds of giants but every time riptide went though them the sand that poured out of their fatal wounds would go back in them. i knew that Gaei was doing that.

Gaei was laughing now. Her cold, unhearted evil laugh. It acted as ice against my soul.

Relielf passed through me as i saw annabeth crawling towards the end of the cave. At least she was alive, I thought.

I had to get...

future HOO books.

posted by halfblood963

こんにちは guys this is my first article,i hope あなた like it.
Here are my opinions on the son of neptune,its about Percy's adventures at camp caesar サラダ (Hecate)and how he gains his memories back like Jason.Then at the end he has new フレンズ but no girlfriend because he has a memory so strong of Annabeth like when he was in the river of styx when he saw her,then the greek demi's come and explain about everything.Then Jason and Percy remember every thing happy ending,NOT! Jason's girlfriend Reyna hugs Jason then Piper gets mad,
CATFIGHT!
book 3 is when the greek demi's and roman demi's go to greece...