Garinina's POV
I stared at the young woman, thoughts running through my mind. How did she obtain that bruise on her forehead...when she is facing up? There is no obvious evidence that she hit her head on the tub. Unless...she was moved or...she didn't die in the bath.
I stared long and hard at the rather large bruise on her forehead, and I noticed something was not normal about it.
I touched her forehead, it felt unusually hard. It did not feel like skull. Curious, I pulled out a scalpel and began slowly cutting the skin of her forehead; this earned a surprised and sickened gasp from my new partner, Kenfi.
After I was done cutting the skin, I didn't expect what I pulled out: a metal plate.
I've now had an idea what her cause of death could be. I know for a fact that if someone is striked hard enough in the head, the hit could literally rattle the person's brain. And with a metal plate, the risk of brain damage is increased.
I examined the metal plate. When I turned it over, I noticed a strange marking. It was a small scarlet red hand-print. Curiosity aroused, I put the metal plate in my pant pocket for later research on that mark...
What happened 次 surprised me yet again...
End of Chapter 2 Part 1
I stared at the young woman, thoughts running through my mind. How did she obtain that bruise on her forehead...when she is facing up? There is no obvious evidence that she hit her head on the tub. Unless...she was moved or...she didn't die in the bath.
I stared long and hard at the rather large bruise on her forehead, and I noticed something was not normal about it.
I touched her forehead, it felt unusually hard. It did not feel like skull. Curious, I pulled out a scalpel and began slowly cutting the skin of her forehead; this earned a surprised and sickened gasp from my new partner, Kenfi.
After I was done cutting the skin, I didn't expect what I pulled out: a metal plate.
I've now had an idea what her cause of death could be. I know for a fact that if someone is striked hard enough in the head, the hit could literally rattle the person's brain. And with a metal plate, the risk of brain damage is increased.
I examined the metal plate. When I turned it over, I noticed a strange marking. It was a small scarlet red hand-print. Curiosity aroused, I put the metal plate in my pant pocket for later research on that mark...
What happened 次 surprised me yet again...
End of Chapter 2 Part 1
This is basically just a 一覧 of all of the Acid-Monsters in existence as of this very moment. I have this here just in case my computer crashes. (I'm super paranoid about that.) And before あなた say something like "This isn't part of this fanbase!" Yes it is, and if あなた do say that, あなた weren't around when Yxari Sadaris first came out as a character. Acid-Monsters originated as a Mobian species.
So, as of today:
Full-Bloods--
Paris Blake
Almodea Blake
Albus Anguis (Owned によって TheTacoMan)
Jakob Enu
Milo Smalls
Melik (owned によって TakTheFox)
Ryker (owned によって MephilesTheDark)
Yxari Sadaris
Yukari Nale
Ana-Luisa Oliviera
(Ana-Lysa and Sayofrick-- deceased.)
[You can only make a full-blood if I like あなた and あなた get my approval.]
Half-Bloods--
狐, フォックス (soon to be a full-blood)
Nazareth Runner
Rynk (Owned によって TakTheFox)
[Room for discussion as to making a half-blood...]
So, as of today:
Full-Bloods--
Paris Blake
Almodea Blake
Albus Anguis (Owned によって TheTacoMan)
Jakob Enu
Milo Smalls
Melik (owned によって TakTheFox)
Ryker (owned によって MephilesTheDark)
Yxari Sadaris
Yukari Nale
Ana-Luisa Oliviera
(Ana-Lysa and Sayofrick-- deceased.)
[You can only make a full-blood if I like あなた and あなた get my approval.]
Half-Bloods--
狐, フォックス (soon to be a full-blood)
Nazareth Runner
Rynk (Owned によって TakTheFox)
[Room for discussion as to making a half-blood...]
Hi. I'm Shade2145. It appears a load of あなた are Mary-sues. I am here to help. Unlike someother FC guides. I give アドバイス in the best (and shortest) way possible.I don't try and offend you,this is just here to help.
So here we go!
Chapter One
Mary Sueing is when あなた bassically God Mod.
Don't know what God Modding is? It's when your Invincible,not being able to die. Thats wat Mary sueing is. Let's take an example from a RP.
N00b133!!!: I shoot あなた then telport あなた inside then kill you!! N00B! N00B pro!!!!
Mephilesthedark: Mary suer
N00B133!!!: LOLOLOLOLOLN00B あなた JUST MADE UP AN WORD
See what i mean? This will turn into something like this
N00B133!!!: I kill u
N00B134: Oh no あなた never.
Now. This is the terrible thing of Mary sueing. If we 表示する ourselves to weak and don't stop Marysueing,this Commuity of 2,257. Will disapearr and be absorbed into MarySuering.
Do あなた want that? No.
Chapter 2.
Never Mary sue.
That is all.
So here we go!
Chapter One
Mary Sueing is when あなた bassically God Mod.
Don't know what God Modding is? It's when your Invincible,not being able to die. Thats wat Mary sueing is. Let's take an example from a RP.
N00b133!!!: I shoot あなた then telport あなた inside then kill you!! N00B! N00B pro!!!!
Mephilesthedark: Mary suer
N00B133!!!: LOLOLOLOLOLN00B あなた JUST MADE UP AN WORD
See what i mean? This will turn into something like this
N00B133!!!: I kill u
N00B134: Oh no あなた never.
Now. This is the terrible thing of Mary sueing. If we 表示する ourselves to weak and don't stop Marysueing,this Commuity of 2,257. Will disapearr and be absorbed into MarySuering.
Do あなた want that? No.
Chapter 2.
Never Mary sue.
That is all.