hello people

Remember when i asked for help with lyrics? well i came up with a song and i want your opinion on it please!
Ready? here it is:

My bloods pouring to the ground
And あなた dont even care.
I look at あなた pleading
And あなた just walk away.
あなた ripped out my ハート, 心 and soul
burned them to ash.
Now あなた say your sorry?
あなた say あなた want me back?

Get the hell away from me
Youve hurt me
Get out of my life
Youve scarred me
あなた were the best thing in my life
Then あなた turned and walked away
あなた 発言しました あなた loved me,
And still あなた walked away

あなた made me hate my life
Made me hate myself.
Youve driven me to all the things
I swore i wouldnt touch.
Im not some punching bag
For あなた to pound.
Im my own person
Not just someone in the crowd.

Get the hell away from me
Youve hurt me
Get out of my life
Youve scarred me
あなた were the best thing in my life
Then あなた turned and walked away
あなた 発言しました あなた loved me,
And still あなた walked away

Im not afraid または あなた anymore.
Im gonna make my stand
Stick up for myself.
Im gonna make my stand
あなた cant hurt me anymore.

Get the hell away from me
Youve hurt me
Get out of my life
Youve scarred me
あなた were the best thing in my life
Then あなた turned and walked away
あなた 発言しました あなた loved me,
And still あなた walked away

あなた 発言しました あなた loved me,
And still あなた walked away