Problem is it doesn't look like a ピザ but I guess it's better than your first attempt. Although why not あなた focus on the regular types of ピザ to get the hang of it? Then why あなた have have that down then venture out.
My 5 年 old nephew has made better pizzas than that.
Just look at that shit, everything is piled on too high, the cheese is a garnish and not a base, the crust looks store bought, and there is no sauce. It's not even a pizza, this looks like the kind of キャセロール bullshit my white 尻, お尻 sister would bring to thanksgiving.