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あなた like my story!??!?!?!??!

This is how I ship my-self with Mello so if that much turns あなた off then don't read it XD

It was like when he was joining the Mafia we'd been there for about a 月 and one day, I told the guys to clean up (since I'm a girl and don't like mess). And there were like "What did あなた say?" So i told them i was tired of cleaning up after them all the time. So the leader was all like "I'd like to hear あなた say that again," and kept coming closer to me till I was backed up on a wall. Then I was just standing there too scared to say anything, so he put his hand under my chin to force me to look at him and was like "What's wrong? Cat gotcher tongue." and he dragged me into the 次 room and pushed me on the ベッド and tried to rape me. So Mello heard me fighting and heard bumping sounds (which was me kicking and him falling off of me) so he ran into the room and fought them off for me and told them "leave her alone if あなた want some so bad go out and buy it または he'd kill all of them" so he grabbed me によって my wrist and pulled me to his room and threw me at the ウォール grabbed my shoulders and was like "What's wrong with you?! How could あなた let that happen?!" and I started to cry I was so scared. I もっと見る afraid of him being mad at me than being raped. So I 発言しました "I'm sorry, I was trying to fight them off but there were too many." and I looked up, and his eyes got softer. We were just staring at each other for a while then he kissed the tears away from my face one at a time. Then I put my hands on the back of his neck and kissed him and we both slid down to the floor.And after we realized what we were doing we stopped and just stood there for a while looking at each other then he got up and went to the bathroom surprised at what he did. I waited for him to come out but he didn't so I went to his ベッド and fell asleep.

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*myself *. *We'd *they *I *I *against a ウォール *, *got your tongue that's some. XD
wantadog posted 1年以上前
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Thank you. XD
amzel posted 1年以上前
 amzel posted 1年以上前
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trainofdoom82 said:
This is fucking terrible

Just saying.

Self inserts are bad enough, but I'm not judging the 書く based on the pairing, the style, tone, dialogue, grammar is just terrible.

No. Just no.


あなた need to try harder.
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posted 1年以上前 
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Agreed
dragonchick posted 1年以上前
xFluttershyx said:
:)
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 :)
posted 1年以上前 
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Did あなた read it?
amzel posted 1年以上前
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No.
xFluttershyx posted 1年以上前
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Omg XD
amzel posted 1年以上前
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XD
xFluttershyx posted 1年以上前
mmmpienomnomnom said:
too many words, aru! DX
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posted 1年以上前 
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Noooooooooooooooo please it's good! People who read it 発言しました so!
amzel posted 1年以上前
Panda-Hero said:
I already told you, it'rs pretty sweet.
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posted 1年以上前 
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and I mean sweet as in awww
Panda-Hero posted 1年以上前
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See あなた like it! They refuse to read it! I typed it all up and no one wants to read it!
amzel posted 1年以上前
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Well,you can't FORCE them to read it.Anyway,I think it's alright.Just improve the grammar a bit.:)
90sfan posted 1年以上前
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^She wasn't forcing, she was asking. Forcing would be 'READ THIS または I KILL MY SISTER'
Panda-Hero posted 1年以上前
emimc said:
Awwwwwww, so sweet. Luv da story!
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posted 1年以上前 
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Yay. Thank あなた :D
amzel posted 1年以上前
wantadog said:
That's kinda cool. I'm not much of a DN ファン though...
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Thank あなた And what no grammar naziism(s) XD
amzel posted 1年以上前
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lol if あなた want XD
wantadog posted 1年以上前
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Take it away! I know one thing though, almoth all those sentences started with "and".
amzel posted 1年以上前
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lol I usually discount that one
wantadog posted 1年以上前
TotalDramaDoll6 said:
u should do a part 2! exept no rape. i personaly think it would be better without rape. but its sweet how he rescued u :D
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XD No rape! あなた make it sould funny. And thanks.!
amzel posted 1年以上前
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thx :)
TotalDramaDoll6 posted 1年以上前
XxKeithHarkinxX said:
TL;DR

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egyptprincess7 said:
*Blinks* It's okay.
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hgfan5602 said:
Rape's not for me.
Besides, あなた should post your stuff on True Writers.
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BlindBandit92 said:
Um yeah I am not gonna read a story based on あなた shipping yourself with Mello. Yeah no.
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ScaryCatfish said:
Eh.. Try a bit harder, mate. I'm assuming あなた like Death Note too. L(デスノート) is my お気に入り character.
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