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I know I should ask this on the 書く spot, but it would probably get answered quickly and effectively here...

The sentence below is in the story I'm writing, I'm trying to figure out the best way to punctuate it and I figured some of the fellow grammar Nazi's on here could help.

It had always been one of Joey's お気に入り traits because it seemed to suggest the eerie truth, that ヴァンパイア were although solid, moving creatures not really alive.
 Jeffersonian posted １年以上前
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TheNumber8 said:
Though it may not be entirely grammatically correct considering the fact that I have unorthodox ways of doing everything, this is the way that I suggest あなた phrase it:

"It had always been one of Joey's お気に入り traits. It seemed to suggest the eerie truth; although ヴァンパイア were solid, moving creatures, they were not really alive."


Hope to help.~
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posted １年以上前 
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Thanks.
Jeffersonian posted １年以上前
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You're welcome.
TheNumber8 posted １年以上前
Sammisaurus said:
It had always been one of Joey's お気に入り traits because it seemed to suggest the eerie truth: that vampires, although solid moving creatures, were not really alive.
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posted １年以上前 
cassie-1-2-3 said:
Add a semicolon (;) after "truth" and a comma after "creatures".

Though if it were me, I'd say it like this:

It had always been one of Joey's お気に入り traits because it seemed to suggest the eerie truth. Vampires, though solid, moving creatures, are/were not really alive.

"are/were" because I don't know what tense you're in.

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posted １年以上前 
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Except it couldn't be a semicolon because semicolons are used for linking two complete sentences together.
Sammisaurus posted １年以上前
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The semicolon would be used to indicate that something is going to be listed.
cassie-1-2-3 posted １年以上前
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Both are acceptable in this situation.
cassie-1-2-3 posted １年以上前
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