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Should I keep on making short stories? (Please no rude コメント :))

The Not So Worm
A Short Story によって :YoshiStar
One 日 when I was at least 2 または 3 years old I was outside with my dad. I saw something through the 草 and I picked it up. At first I thought it was a worm. So I waved it in the air and said: "Look daddykins a worm!"
And my dad said: "Holly S***!!! That's not a F***** worm! That's a 草 snake!"
And so I said: "OH" and droped it. And walked back into my house and ate some イチゴ ice cream...

Please tell me what あなた think. Should I continue または no? And please no rude comments:)
 YoshiStar posted １年以上前
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kittencutie119 said:
No
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posted １年以上前 
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Thank あなた for answering:) I really apreciate it:))
YoshiStar posted １年以上前
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Your welcome. With a little moe practice, あなた could eventually get a little better wth progress
kittencutie119 posted １年以上前
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thank あなた sooooo much! This helps alot:)
YoshiStar posted １年以上前
JudyNails said:
I think あなた should!
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posted １年以上前 
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Thank you!:D
YoshiStar posted １年以上前
Shadowmarioking said:
lol that is a hilarious story wished that'd happen to me XD

go ahead, continue :D
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posted １年以上前 
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I'd be glad to!:D
YoshiStar posted １年以上前
IHWTA said:
That was.... A really short, short story...
Kind of... random...
I say no. No offense of anything.
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posted １年以上前 
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Thanks anyway:) None taken BTW
YoshiStar posted １年以上前
YOUTH-UNLIMITED said:
It's not actually a story.these are the lackings of this story.try to correct your faults and practice more.
1.the story doesn't got any meaning
2.the story doesn't got any moral
3.the story doesn't got any climate
4.the story doesn't got any message and aim. So...if あなた can overcome this faults and practice more,you will be able to make great stories.good luck:)
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posted １年以上前 
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Thank you:)
YoshiStar posted １年以上前
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あなた are most welcome:)
YOUTH-UNLIMITED posted １年以上前
hellokittygirl2 said:
i think yes u should make it little funny and scary
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posted １年以上前 
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I will:))
YoshiStar posted １年以上前
Brandey said:
Hm...It's kinda strange,I don't know what to say.
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posted １年以上前 
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Same.
mitchie19 posted １年以上前
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Well its kinda もっと見る like a strange event that heppened in my life...I should have mentioned that:)
YoshiStar posted １年以上前
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Ok than :)
Brandey posted １年以上前
dreamfields said:
If あなた enjoy writing, then continue. The もっと見る practice あなた have, the もっと見る details あなた will include. Nobody sits down and writes a masterpiece on their first try. The story was really short, but it gives あなた a start to build on. Have fun!!!
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Thank you:))
YoshiStar posted １年以上前
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Your welcome :D
dreamfields posted １年以上前
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