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Could ya do me a favor?

Could y'all コメント on my poem? Idk if its good または not. Its based on me and what happend.

Two people...Boy and Girl.




They never met before that year.




It seems like a tale of old ages but today still stands.




Eyes meet all other sounds are tuned away hearing nothing but the beating of each others hearts.




Falling into the deepness of the Boy's eyes she gives herself.




But the boy had new ideas and left her.




Her last words was a four letter 質問 meant for the boy to answer and he never did...




Why hear the beating?




he never answered her and she today still hears the beating of their hearts intertwined in that long gaze.

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really noone?
kittencutie119 posted 1年以上前
 kittencutie119 posted 1年以上前
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nikaitla said:
im almost afraid to ask what favour? no i do like your poem its cool
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posted 1年以上前 
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thnx
kittencutie119 posted 1年以上前
CourtneyFan17 said:
I like it. Good job hun :)!
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FairuzBones said:
I like it :)
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Farrahfanatical said:
Well written..
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posted 1年以上前 
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thnx everyone!!
kittencutie119 posted 1年以上前
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