do u like my story?

Since あなた are 書く a story, あなた should probably use proper grammar, no?

But I'm not too sure whether your book revolves around the romance between this main character または whether it's もっと見る about her trying to survive. Either way, I don't really like romance and this story is quite overdone. Sorry, I'm not trying to be mean here, it's just my opinion. Please don't take it personally.

It does sound interesting. Hopefully if あなた plan on posting it here あなた won't use that type of grammar, because although some (like me) make an effort to try to understand as we read it, others will simply 雌犬 about it (No offense to those who will). So just a suggestion: Type it in great grammar for all to read and enjoy. :)

And again, it sounds interesting. Don't know enough to like または dislike, but it grasped my attention. Good job for doing that because I don't like romance that much xD