My first Niall Horan poem, "Love Divided" - Tell me what あなた think? :)

Going somewhere,
Ending nowhere,
Where am I to go?
Wanting solitude,
Finding opposite,
Am I to walk alone?
You, there,
Across the field,
Of ファンタジー and fame.
Where did あなた come from?
How do I get to you,
Without crossing the flame?
あなた appeared out of nowhere,
A 星, つ星 suddenly born,
And I am drawn to your light.
But あなた can't see mine,
Its too dim to shine,
Never seen in the night.
あなた go on in life,
With it displayed to the world,
And mine displayed elsewhere.
あなた go on without knowing,
That I am here, waiting for you,
That I am always there.
And wait I do,
For あなた to see,
The imaginary girl who is always によって your side.
The one with the smile,
The one with the voice,
That you'll never seem to recognize.
So あなた go on,
日 after day,
With your lively life.
While I am stuck here,
Never near,
The one who seems to be my light.
Yes, that's right, あなた are my light,
And shine bright, あなた do.
Edges illuminated,
Flames engulfed,
For the one あなた never knew.
When I am down,
And I listen to your soft melodic words,
Of carefully chosen wisdom.
I know that someday,
Deep in my heart,
My 日 will surely come.
あなた bring me to my senses,
But あなた drive me insane,
You, the boy who's on the edge.
But I am on the verge,
And あなた bring me back from it,
Saving me from darkness.
あなた make me feel free,
Like I am surely alive,
Like あなた 愛 me with a burning passion.
But I am still a nobody,
Blending with the sea,
And I should just push past it.
But something about you,
Something I've never seen before,
Draws me to you.
And I smile in delight,
But frown in fright,
From how much I've fallen for you.
Though, why am I still nowhere?
Why am I alone?
Without you, I am lost.
Without you, I am unknown.


Sorry its so long xD Tell me what あなた think, please ^.^