im making a 1D cartoon, hows this?

(i know to switch the steering wheel)
niall: (in シート, 座席 behind passenger seat) look, a nando's! can we go, liam? PLEEEEAAASE?
louis: (in passenger seat, holding map) are あなた sure we're going the right way?
liam: (driving) check the map again, lou. and no, niall, not today.
harry: (2 seats behind driver seat, sitting sideways, shirtless, arms in air) nakedness!
zayn: (2 seats behind passenger seat, 2 seats over from harry, sleeping)

any changes? comments?