What do あなた guys think of it?

This is my book cover that I made for my fanfiction. I'm wondering if あなた guys think it needs to have もっと見る things to fill the white space? (By the way, the notepad thing above Michael's head says "dear dad." Sorry that the picture is so small; ファンポップ resized it because it was too big. How are あなた guys enjoying the story so far? Any お気に入り parts if あなた had to pick one? L. O. V. E. I have to say that I like 書く this one a whole lot もっと見る than my first one "daddy's little tomboy." It just seems to flow a lot easier this time around and I like how it's in Michael's point of view now. Do あなた prefer "daddy's little tomboy" または "unconditional love…… A story of fatherhood?" I like being able to start completely from scratch again because I often find myself thinking of things that I could've put in the chapter that I didn't think of before I 投稿されました it! Just a heads up, there will be a whole bunch of plot twists and surprising moments coming up! I'm going a whole different direction with this story and I think you're going to like this one way もっと見る than the 前 one!!! I'm not about to reveal anything secrets though… You'll just have to wait and see what I have up my sleeve!!!!!