Can あなた help me?

My cousin's birthday is soon,and my present is a song I wrotte to her listening to Michael and Lisa

"You and I"

あなた and I
あなた and I
will be together forever
あなた and I
we'll be together forever
You're everything to me
and あなた know,and あなた enjoy that
あなた let me down sometimes,but あなた don't care
または may be yes
あなた that I will always 愛 you,no matter what happen
あなた know I will always defent you,but I know
Nobody can hurt あなた like I can
No one can save you,or kill you,or 愛 you,like I can
あなた and I
あなた and I
will be together forever
あなた and I
just like good friends
Who don't 愛 each other
How can I stand you?I don't know
But I'll always support you
How can I be so blind?How can I try to save you?
Nobody knows why I 愛 あなた and I hate あなた at the same time
And no one will knows that I can kill あなた
again and again
but I on't want to
'cause I'll miss you,fucking bitch
あなた really understand me,sweetie
and I know
Nobody loves あなた like I do
and nobody will understand you,like I do
Every one say we're crazy
every one,they're just idiots
あなた I 愛 you,I know あなた 愛 me
Why we fight so much? just tell me why
And I know,this will be forever
あなた and I
あなた and I
will be together forever
あなた and I
We can walk all the world together
'cause we're one,we're one
You're my life


Do あなた like it? あなた think is nice?
Please help me!
I'm not sure about it
Thanks!!