what do u think of this song i wrote for MJ? its only the corus part.

thats beautiful..but whats the tune likee?
:)♥ I've been 書く songs about him too.

It's nice I hope あなた welcome my co-operate
then I ask the hope about you
if it can back you
to my life that I'm losing
without your light
through the night
I look up in the sky
and look for あなた
then I heard
the heaven says to me
" I save him between my arms
without any harms"
I dream about your smile every night
but suddenly I can't find it
through my mind

It's beautiful !!!

So sweeeet that あなた are doing this !!!

I 愛 your song, it's true poetry!! Let us know when it's finished!