My Earth 日 poem.. i wrote it in feburary and i had Mr.Thriller in mind when i wrote it. Do あなた like it. No negative コメント unless its creative critisism:)

What is this we've done.
Don't あなた realize what I, Me, You, Us, We have done to THEE.
Our ホーム for ever with no where else to go, the end of the road.
Go ahead drink the water, its' tates comes from you.
Fine as wine the air has Just the right amount of smoke and here I will choke with your factories blowing steam and your money making machines.
WE are destroying OUR selves, but it's okay.
someone will fix it right? They'll figure out something?
They'll figure out....
oh they....
NO! they who?
WE are they, and They created this disater so they shall help fix it.
Green is the color of our world no going back with it's filthy sources going black.
How about あなた over there, Mr.Millionaire.
help us re-love the planet and re-build the world.
Peoples' success up there nose, Money is the answer to it all i suppose.
No?
Then what is?
there's other children that want toys and clothes, plants and 動物 also have a need for their population to grow.
We must have forgotten about love.
L.O.V.E
あなた hate me.
I hate you.
Unexceptable.
I shall not take, I shall not take または let the world recieve hate.
Go ahead burn down another forest, but when あなた chop down that 木, ツリー I hope you're thinking of me when there's no もっと見る air to breathe and あなた all will wonder, how could this be?
I'll tell あなた how.
Never mind, I already did.
Open up your hearts and realize the life we live.