Here's the first 23 chapters of Angel! link
Okay. So. I just read the first twenty-three chapters (and if you're wondering, JP released it. I was just wondering...is everyone who read the first eight chapters as frustrated with the series as I am right now? Don't get me wrong - the writing isn't bad - it's just what HAPPENS. To those of you who read it, hopefully you don't mind sharing what you thought of it because I have to discuss it with SOMEONE, and none of my friends have read it yet. D: So yeah(: Tell me what you thought of it!
In my opinion, it is absolutely NOT cool how he's making Max fall for Dylan. No offense, but he was going fine until Fang, where he brought Dylan in. In fact, to me, the series got ruined at around The Final Warning. Fang had better come back. He'd BETTER fix it. NOW.