Hi,im 書く songs tell me what u think of this line.the songs called. FANTASY......Fantasy lolly popped extasy.Rainbow ribboncandy,jail fights ライム green snake bites.so what do u think???????

Cool, I write songs 2(but so far, I only made 2 1/2, and there also random), let me no if U wanna check them out. P.S, did U write anyother songs?

Hot! I 愛 it!! I like how who have this ランダム sort of use of words. I have one that I'm writing. The beginning of the refrain goes...

"Love's, like, candlesticks,
Meets with fire, that burns on your lips"

See it doesn't really make sense, but the notes are cool. This is why Lady GaGa is so cool. Her lyrics are twisted, but her notes help make the songs make もっと見る sense!!!

Horrendous.

Keep on 書く maybe one 日 あなた will be famous to あなた are agreat writer

Mabey あなた should try something like "In my ファンタジー there's there is lolly pops rainbows etc. but in reality there's jail fights, snake bites, etc. hope i helped! message me some time.

What is the meaning of this song?

i think its pretty well. keep writing... good luck!!!!:}