This is a song I'm writing, thinking about Huddy. I need opinions. Should I add another verse and chorus? Is it okay where it is? I feel like it's still not quite finished, but I need some ideas. I have a basic melody in my head that I just need to get written down. Anything あなた could do to give me ideas would be greatly appreciated. *THERE IS ONE BAD WORD* Thank You.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell あなた everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
So I’ll simply say I want you.
The world is speeding up
And I am loosing you
My mind is slowing down
あなた 発言しました that we are through
But this can’t be it
I’ve got to try
I’m sorry if my shit
Ever made あなた cry
I need a sign
That you’ll be mine
Casue I am running out of time
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell あなた everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
So I’ll simply say I need you.
You’re trying to 移動する on
And I am loosing you
あなた ロスト your faith in me
And 発言しました that we were through
I can’t leave it like this
I’ve got to try
For that one last kiss
Even if it is goodbye
I need a sign
That you’ll be mine
Cause I am running out of time
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell あなた everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
But I’ve got to say I 愛 you.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell あなた everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
So I’ll simply say I want you.
The world is speeding up
And I am loosing you
My mind is slowing down
あなた 発言しました that we are through
But this can’t be it
I’ve got to try
I’m sorry if my shit
Ever made あなた cry
I need a sign
That you’ll be mine
Casue I am running out of time
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell あなた everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
So I’ll simply say I need you.
You’re trying to 移動する on
And I am loosing you
あなた ロスト your faith in me
And 発言しました that we were through
I can’t leave it like this
I’ve got to try
For that one last kiss
Even if it is goodbye
I need a sign
That you’ll be mine
Cause I am running out of time
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell あなた everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
But I’ve got to say I 愛 you.