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What do あなた think of this idea?And would あなた read it?(do not copy!!!!!)

Kim is your average 13 年 up until her 14 birthday when she discovers she has extraordinary powers.She wakes up in the middle of the night to find that her eyes have gone a light sparkly ピンク colour.Her parents tell her they have powers too.Kim then takes special classes to train her powers were she meets this gut called Kristian.Kristians power is to make people fall in 愛 with him.Little does Kim knoe her real parents are 'evil' and trying to rid the world of powerless people!Kim falls for Kristian.Kristian asks Kim back to his house where he drugs her.Kim wakes up in her real parents house strapped to a chair!Her own parents are going to kill her for their own daughters powers!!!!!!!
What do あなた think of this idea?And would あなた read it?(do not copy!!!!!)
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I would so read that story sounds good
princesspinkla posted １年以上前
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あなた had me at the sixth line.
dragonrider posted １年以上前
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あなた ロスト me at the part about 愛
gaaria posted １年以上前
 Cullen-fan posted １年以上前
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greekgirlA said:
please write it and publish
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posted １年以上前 
cheeeese said:
thats a good story :) whats kim's powers?
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posted １年以上前 
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Kims powers are: Controls weather with her moods,plant growth she can kill あなた if she touchs あなた she can control liquids and thats only a few!!!!!I havent thought of anymore!
Cullen-fan posted １年以上前
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what about... can manifest the 4 elements??
1-2vampire posted １年以上前
Elie_star said:
Mmm, I don't know. I'd like to read it... Maybe Kristian will fall in 愛 with her?
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posted １年以上前 
Dearheart said:
(Sparkly, light-pink eyes?? *facepalm* OMG...)

Sounds to me like あなた have a class 1 Mary Sue in the making. I strongly suggest あなた run your character(s) through this test before あなた go any further.

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It should help あなた get a better idea of where your character's at and which cliches to steer clear from.
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(Sparkly, light-pink eyes?? *facepalm* OMG...) Sounds to me like あなた have a class 1 Mary Sue in the making. I strongly suggest あなた run your character(s) through this test before あなた go any further. http://www.springhole.net/quizzes/marysue.htm It should help あなた get a better idea of where your character's at and which cliches to steer clear from.
posted １年以上前 
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What exactly do あなた want me to do!!!?
Cullen-fan posted １年以上前
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I'm sorry for being rude...it's just that this sounds too much like something you'd find on FanFiction.Net. Like I said, just take a few 分 and go through the test. I really think it will help.
Dearheart posted １年以上前
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Chill out. No need to cuss. And dearheart was making A FREAKIN SUGGESTION
Fairstepshaven posted １年以上前
forbiddenLURVE said:
sounds really good!!! if あなた become an 作者 and get it print i'll read it [:
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posted １年以上前 
BiteMeCullen107 said:
nice but あなた should describe it more. i would so read it.
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posted １年以上前 
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Cullen-fan posted １年以上前
1-2vampire said:
REALLY GOOOD!! i wanna b an 作者 and am riting a story too!!! im on chptr 11 so im not done yet, my link for the first 2 chapters is,

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PLEASE LOOK AND COMMENT!!!
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posted １年以上前 
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Cullen-fan posted １年以上前
booklover101 said:
that is awsome r u going 2 finish it i would tottaly read it!!!
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posted １年以上前 
anakin_fan81 said:
This sound kind of wierd. Maybe あなた should work on the idea a bit and make it less confusing.
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posted １年以上前 
Shepard14 said:
I like the Idea...Although DearHeart? Why is it あなた sem so critical of other ppl's writing? I don't mean to sound antagonistic when i say that....I am just curious....You know...a thought just occured to me....what if セレブ have profiles on here...hahahah that would be funny
to see their reaction when they see how many ファン they have on this website alone..hahahaha
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posted １年以上前 
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lol that was so ランダム with the celebrity thing. but that would still be awesome!
BellaCullen96 posted １年以上前
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I KNOW RIGHT! COMPLETLY RANDOM...but i just thought of it and i HAD to share it
Shepard14 posted １年以上前
renesmee13 said:
write もっと見る will ya?
it was pretty good =)
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posted １年以上前 
samoangirl96 said:
i like the story except the kristian part sorta freaky but other then tat pretty cool story can't wait to read もっと見る of it
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posted １年以上前 
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THE KRISTAN PART IS THE BEST PART!
bananafreak18 posted １年以上前
sickla said:
wow
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posted １年以上前 
writer67 said:
laws of stone of magic rules, do not allow others fall in 愛 it must be free will, for safety reasons!
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posted １年以上前 
sixtynugget said:
How about while she is attending this magical school she befriends a geeky nerd who can mindread and use telekinieses
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posted １年以上前 
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that sounds cool
annalia posted １年以上前
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GOOD IDEA
bananafreak18 posted １年以上前
bananafreak18 said:
WHEN U FINISH IT GIVE ME A HEADS UP CUZ THAT IS A AWESOME STORY!
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posted １年以上前 
tall said:
nic story
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prim17luvr101 said:
My personal opinion is it's kind of boring and not well developed at all.
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posted １年以上前 
Shirohige1939 said:
The story sounds great. I would read it. Sounds very interesting
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posted １年以上前 
Sutelc22 said:
geat 書く my friend.
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