With JJ

Okay so I wrote a ファン fiction and before i really 投稿されました it I wanted feedback because i don't want to end up having a bad story.
Well here it goes!

Chapter 1
Spencer Reid's Point of View :

It was 1:05 in the morning and Spencer had woken up with a cold sweat, apparently the case the team and him just had was pretty bad. It was about nine 年 old girls that were being raped and murdered in Anna, Texas with roughly a population of 1,225 people everyone is connected. Turns out a local forth grade teacher was targeting girls while in school, he then looked up the girls addresses in the school's...

>> I can tell あなた know, this is my 6:30 AM too much Criminal Minds idea.... It starts out as a kinda everyone story but it goes into a もっと見る of a Reid superhero, good guy, savior, person thing... I don't know. Well thanks for at least 読書 this and I hope あなた like the actual story. (* hoping あなた didn't kinda leave after 読書 this alone*)


JJ looked over the current unsolved crimes going on around the world, when one especially caught her eye. "Everyone into the briefing room," she spoke into her walkie-talkie. She walked straight into the briefing room, going to the front, JJ noticed...