This is just an idea I would like onest feedback please! Breaking Dawn
The Wedding
    I was walking down the aisle to marry my beloved Edward. It was now time. But was I ready? I stared at Edward making sure that I didn’t let my eyes stray where Jacob, my best friend, and my お気に入り mechanic should be sitting. I exhaled and kept my eyes on Edward. Trying not to let my eyes stray to where Seth was sitting either knowing that he would look at me with eyes that say Bella, he’s not coming back sorry. Instead I just kept my eyes on Edward.
    Then I was there the priest did the normal stuff I wasn’t really paying attention honestly I was to busy concentrating on Edward and breathing. When out of no where Edward said
    “I do.” Oh crap I had to pay attention now. Here comes my part. I think. Yep.
    “I do.” Edward smiled at me . I smiled back then his expression turned worried he was looking at Alice behind me now. All I could think was what did Alice see. Then he just shook his head. That’s when I had to look at Seth knowing that he would of saw it. He just turned away and left. Then it hit me Alice saw nothing. I wouldn’t let myself believe he was here.
     No! No! Then Alice shook her head agin. Agin nothing. Then Seth came in shaking his head and nodding at Alice and Edward. He was coming. I was excited but disappointed.
    Would he just leave agin? Would he stay? Could I take it? What about Charlie? That’s when I realized that it was done I was married Edward was leaning in to キッス me. When he did everyone clapped and cheered even Charlie did. I was walking back down the isle now with Edward in my arms.
    “Bella, he is outside are あなた ready? Do あなた want to see him?”
    “Yes, I’m ready I think I can handle it.”
    “You think?”
    “Edward please I can do it.”
    “Okay.” We walked outside and there he was.
    “Jacob!” I sounded a bit surprised.
    “Hey Bells. How was the wedding?” I was trying to think of somthing that wouldn’t hurt Edward’s feelings but was true.
    “Interesting.”
    “Yeah sorry ‘bout that.”
    “Don’t worry about that you’re here and that is great.”
    “I’m not staying but I thought I should give あなた blessing I guess that’s the word. And here is your wedding present. It’s もっと見る for あなた than for Edward.”
    “Wait Jacob your leaving?” I was holding back the tears and Edward kissed me on 上, ページのトップへ of my head.. Not saying anything knowing that it would hurt me.
    “I’m sorry Bells.” I chuckled to myself.
    “Nice promise!” Regretting that I 発言しました anything as I 発言しました it.
    “What promise?!”
    “The one where あなた would never leave me!”
    “You’re the one leaving me!” That was when Edward spoke up.
    “Jacob Black! Do あなた even care about her!? Look at her she had to concentrate on me the whole time just to not look at where あなた were going to be! He shouted at him and I was tearing up.
    “You know I care!”
    “Then why are あなた leaving!” I shouted
    “I don’t have a choice!” I couldn’t believe what I was hearing.
    “Says who! あなた because I sure as hell didn’t say that!” Jacob just looked down and before I knew it turned away and ran. All I did was turn into Edwards chest and cry. He lead me into the limo and helped me get cleaned up for the reception.