MT2: OUUUUCH!!

I guess I'm allowed to post it here.BTW I decited to write it again because I want to change many things.
The story starts after "Finale Medley"

There were many hand clapping from the audience.
After the コンサート finished Keira and Tori went from the stage talking an laughing.Liam that was looking for them finally found them
"Wait for me"said he.
"Hi Liam"said they both with one voice.
"Tori,you were awesome"said he.Tori blushed.Suddenly the smile on Keira's face was gone.
She expected that he would compliment both of them.
Then she run away leaving Tori and Liam alone.
"Want to go on a carriage ride?"said...

I'm waking up late, after 12 o'clock
I'm making breakfast, I don't tidy up a thing
They tell me, don't do like a baby,
Be もっと見る mature, but that's just who I am

And everything's perfect
Nothing is holding me back now
And everything's perfect
I'm living in a dream
Everything's perfect
I don't care about tomorrow
I'd like to live for today
And everything's perfect

It's 10:00 at night, I'm ready to go out
To have fun, with フレンズ that I love
Wake up! Don't tell me it's just a dream,
'Cause I'll get pissed off and I'll tell you
Don't try to to ruin my dream

Everything's perfect
Nothing is holding me back now
And...