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----SPOILER ALERT----

Below is an excerpt from the original, unedited draft of the first chapter of "Because あなた Loved Me". If あなた do not wish to be spoiled, trespass no further.

----Chapter 1: The Storm----

Suddenly, she heard heavy footsteps approaching her. Someone was in the house. Not again, she thought. A burglar had broken in their house the other week, and Liana couldn't let it happen again. She took the broom, which was leaning against the ウォール in a corner of the kitchen, and prepared herself to ambush the intruder.

She waited... And the perfect moment came. The footsteps stopped right 次 to the ウォール she was hiding behind. Liana took a deep breath and started hitting the burglar repeatedly with the broom.

"Ow! No, wait! Ouch! Liana, it's me!" The burglar screeched with an oh so familiar voice, raising his hands to defend himself from her attacks.

She stopped just as she realized the person she wa s assaulting was her husband, who had just come ホーム from work. She blushed at her own mistake and quickly hid the ほうき behind her.

"Oh, I'm so sorry! Jeremy, are あなた okay?" She asked, feeling worried and embarrassed at the situation she had just got herself into.

"Well... I was expecting a warmer welcome... One that doesn't involve ambushing me with a broom... または any other kitchenware for that matter." Jeremy said, rubbing the back of his head.

"I'm sorry." Liana let go of the ほうき and threw her arms around his neck, giving him a sweet apologetic smile.

"Don't worry, I think I'll live," Jeremy laughed as he gazed at her beautiful blue eyes. "But just so あなた know, your aggressive side is beginning to show."

"I thought we had a burglar... again," She elaborated. "Though I don't know why anyone would want to steal anything here." She looked around the house, a sad expression marring her features. There was indeed nothing valuable to steal in this house.

"Well, I'm afraid now they'll have something to steal from us. So promise me you'll always keep this with you." Jeremy 発言しました and placed a ピンク chalcedony in his wife's hand. She gasped at the sight of the gemstone.

"Where did あなた get it?" She blurted out.

"In the mines," He replied casually. "I'm not a thief, don't worry. A workmate of mine found it."

"Oh, I see." Liana took a closer look at the stone, then looked at Jeremy again. "But what's the occasion? It's not my birthday, または anything like that."

Jeremy smiled.

"Oh, it's just... It's so beautiful, and I thought you'd like it. Besides, since I'm not going to be around now that I have to work extra hours in the mines, I want あなた to keep something that reminds あなた of me. So that あなた won't freak out and run around randomly assaulting people with that broom." He explained with a grin. Liana frowned. Must he always bring up her embarrassing moments? He was so much like Alexa.

"That's just so romantic, Jeremy" She said, trying to hide the blush that was starting to creep on her face.

But then, Jeremy stopped smiling and looked at Liana with an almost pain-stricken expression, then began to speak in a serious tone.

"You know our life isn't easy... And it will never be. There will be moments in our life when あなた feel scared, when あなた feel like あなた can't go on anymore. But life goes on. Whatever あなた might believe, life always goes on. あなた just have to find enough strength and faith to 移動する on with it. So everytime あなた feel like giving up, hold it in your hands and think of me. It'll give あなた strength."

There was a moment of silence before Jeremy began laughing about how he scared her with that one. Liana laughed along with him, but she still couldn't get rid of that tiny uneasy feeling inside her stomach. The way he 発言しました it... and his sudden change of attitude... It scared her.

But then she soon forgot about it. Perhaps she was never convinced that something could go wrong. Their life was perfect. There couldn't be anything lurking in the dark, ready to harm them, right?

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Okay, I know it's horrible, but it's just the draft. Final result might look different. Feed me with your thoughts!
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Every fairy has her own secret, a Fairy secret! All the secrets of Fairytopia kept in safety in Fairytopia's Secrets' Cavern. But in one day, the Cavern is invaded! If desecreted, Fairytopia is in trouble! Everyone in Fairytopia is hoping on The Guardians, and The Guardians are hoping on...Elina the fairy! Will Elina save her native country from an old evil and keep all the secrets in their place?

Well, a long time 前 written FF, was originally titled A Fairy Secret. Screw Mattelz -_- and hey, the style I've written this プレビュー is totally Mattelzish-like. So, wait if あなた want to read it, または don't wait, if あなた don't want to read, lol.
posted by Genevievebarbie
作者 : Saeryen
情報源 : fanfiction.net
Author's Summary : A few years after the double wedding in which Princess Anneliese of Kattenland and her look-alike, Erika, each married the ones they loved, King Dominick's ambassador has become disillusioned with the fact that his クイーン was born a peasant. He seeks out Preminger, now imprisoned in Kattenland's dungeon, and asks for his help in seizing Dulcinea.
Chapter : 12/12
Disclaimer : None of this belongs to me. The characters are owned によって mattel and the plot is owned によって the author.

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Chapter 12

Erika...
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posted by Genevievebarbie
作者 : Saeryen
情報源 : fanfiction.net
Author's Summary : A few years after the double wedding in which Princess Anneliese of Kattenland and her look-alike, Erika, each married the ones they loved, King Dominick's ambassador has become disillusioned with the fact that his クイーン was born a peasant. He seeks out Preminger, now imprisoned in Kattenland's dungeon, and asks for his help in seizing Dulcinea.
Chapter : 10/12
Disclaimer : None of this belongs to me. The characters are owned によって mattel and the plot is owned によって the author.

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Chapter 10

Panting,...
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posted by Genevievebarbie
作者 : Saeryen
情報源 : fanfiction.net
Author's Summary : A few years after the double wedding in which Princess Anneliese of Kattenland and her look-alike, Erika, each married the ones they loved, King Dominick's ambassador has become disillusioned with the fact that his クイーン was born a peasant. He seeks out Preminger, now imprisoned in Kattenland's dungeon, and asks for his help in seizing Dulcinea.
Chapter : 3/12
Disclaimer : None of this belongs to me. The characters are owned によって mattel and the plot is owned によって the author.

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Chapter 3

Erika...
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作者 : Genevievebarbie
情報源 : fanpop.com
Author's Summary : Prequel to バービー in the 12 Dancing Princesses. The story of how Prince Randolph and Lady Isabella faced hardships and difficulties and later on, fell in 愛 and got married. This is my first fanfiction so please no flames. Lastly, please read and review!
Rating : T
Category : Romance, Drama
Disclaimer : The main characters of the story are owned によって Mattel. I own all the supporting characters and the plot.

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Chapter 10 : Life in Kattendelle

Kattendelle. A beautiful, bustling kingdom...
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posted by Genevievebarbie
作者 : Saeryen
情報源 : fanfiction.net
Author's Summary : A few years after the double wedding in which Princess Anneliese of Kattenland and her look-alike, Erika, each married the ones they loved, King Dominick's ambassador has become disillusioned with the fact that his クイーン was born a peasant. He seeks out Preminger, now imprisoned in Kattenland's dungeon, and asks for his help in seizing Dulcinea.
Chapter : 7/12
Disclaimer : None of this belongs to me. The characters are owned によって mattel and the plot is owned によって the author.

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Chapter 7

If...
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posted by Genevievebarbie
作者 : Saeryen
情報源 : fanfiction.net
Author's Summary : A few years after the double wedding in which Princess Anneliese of Kattenland and her look-alike, Erika, each married the ones they loved, King Dominick's ambassador has become disillusioned with the fact that his クイーン was born a peasant. He seeks out Preminger, now imprisoned in Kattenland's dungeon, and asks for his help in seizing Dulcinea.
Chapter : 5/12
Disclaimer : None of this belongs to me. The characters are owned によって mattel and the plot is owned によって the author.

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Chapter 5

When...
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作者 : Genevievebarbie
情報源 : fanpop.com
Author's Summary : Prequel to バービー in the 12 Dancing Princesses. The story of how Prince Randolph and Lady Isabella faced hardships and difficulties and later on, fell in 愛 and got married. This is my first fanfiction so please no flames. Lastly, please read and review!
Rating : T
Category : Romance, Drama
Disclaimer : The main characters of the story are owned によって Mattel. I own all the supporting characters and the plot.

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Chapter 8 : Meeting the Prince

Randolph was miserable. Each day, Athena's...
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作者 : Genevievebarbie
情報源 : fanpop.com
Author's Summary : Prequel to バービー in the 12 Dancing Princesses. The story of how Prince Randolph and Lady Isabella faced hardships and difficulties and later on, fell in 愛 and got married. This is my first fanfiction so please no flames. Lastly, please read and review!
Rating : T
Category : Romance, Drama
Disclaimer : The main characters of the story are owned によって Mattel. I own all the supporting characters and the plot.

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Chapter 17 : もっと見る Guilt

As it turned out, even though Isabella knew the castle...
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