アニメ Writting/Fan Fiction Contest! (Closed for now)

x-Yumi-x3 posted on Oct 22, 2012 at 01:35AM
You'll need to read every single bit of this to understand how this will work. If something is messed up and you just don't undetstand anything ask, please bear with me.

Welcome to my writting contest. I thought about it making a contest like this because I know I really love to write as in writing story of my favorite anime characters. Or I guess articles, Fan fictions which you guys like to call it.
With are from Naruto they're Itachi, Sasuke, Naruto, Sasori, Deidara, and ect.
Along with my OC Yumi and others.
And from other animes.

It I'll be very fun if a lot of people where to join; I see a lot of people on this site writting or typing there own fan fictions and asking people to read them. So why not do it here?

Rudes/How it's done:

How we're gonna do is, you gonna be juged on how well the story is written. I don't mean GRAMMAR you don't have to have PERFECT grammar, my grammar sucks, my spelling sucks.
Just let us be able to tell what your saying.

I'd really rather you didn't type in text talk, although I have a few text talk in my storys. You can have a few but I don't wanna see in every sentece, lol, rolf, wbu, nvm, and ect. It want hurt you, cause I am allowing you to have a little bit of text talk.

This is probably the most important thing ever. How long should your story be?
We don't want it five pages long, no one whats to read a five page long story oka? We just don't mostly when we have others to juge. Let it be a paragraph if it need to be longer than let it be, we don't want a page long either UNLESS you write you storys like I do. In RP fourm.
Example:
Yumi: I hope we have a lot of great storys, I can't wait!
Akio: I agree.
That's the only way you can have it, that long because it doesn't take that long to read. Unless you have a whole paragraph of each person talking. .-.

Next would be, can I submit in a story that I didn't write?
Yes, BUT you have to say, I didn't write this you can't take the credit of someone elses work. Put who wrote it, if you don't know who wrote it then just say I didn't write this. I don't want every single story you write to be someone elses, there's no fun in that..!

You can write each sotry in RP from story from I don't care.

How this is gonna work it we like you to write a story with your characters with our topics. That means if we say we want a funny story it has to have something funny in it.
If it says Free writing it can be about anything you want. (We know a lot of people will like the free writing so we'll put that in a lot.)
Why do we have topics? Why not? Don't you find it more challenging?
The topics are.
1st topic: Funny
2nd topic: Free writing
3rd topic: Sad
4th topic: Action
5th topic: Who ever wins gets to pick the next topic.(doesn't matter what it is.)
6th topic: Scary
7th topic: Free Writing
8th tpoic: Funny
9th topic: Free writing.
10 topic: Free writing

How this will be juged is how well the juges like your story, and how well you put it into the topic.
No Juge will Juge on, you grammar as said before.
We want not like your story because You have Yaoi and Yuri in your story. We want hate your story because of your pairings, your characters or anything I'll make sure everything is fair.

Juges: We need like five juge we already have 2 we need 3 more juges PLEASE be a juge if you want to be one than please ask I want say no. But if your gonna be one you HAVE to be an active member on fanpop. I need five juges because I'm not an active member on fanpop me and the other juge aren't, we get on once everyday but that's really not enough. if you're a juge that means you run this contest also oka?

The juges are able to leave comments about what they think of your story.

Winners:
1st:
2nd:

We'll try not to let the same people win each time.

Needs to be read:
How you will Submit in your story is by giving us the link OR
writing it, down there V_V or copying it pasting it.
Your gonna need this information on it.
Characters:
Anime they're from: (If they're OC's than say OC's)
And who it's wrote by: (If it's not your story than put who's it is.)

Notice: YOUR STORY CAN BE ABOUT ANYTHING. It doesn't have to be about Naruto because I like Naruto, I also like other animes.

Yes your story has to be about Anime. Talk to me if it's not.

So lets me sum everything up.

Rudes:
-No being mean because you don't like someones story.
-Have fun.
- No long freaking five page storys.

Topics: (Every week we'll change topics, but the first topic is different because of how late this contest is starting.)(Also on the weekends that's when we juge and pick the winners; It's like this because of my schedule. I'm pretty busy.)

1st topic: Funny (Oct 23-Oct 26)
2nd topic: Free writing
3rd topic: Sad
4th topic: Action
5th topic: Who ever wins gets to pick the next topic.(doesn't matter what it is.)~
(Winner Clutch, He chose- Free Writting.)
6th topic: Romance~
7th topic: Free Writing (Winner gets a prize.)
8th tpoic: Funny
9th topic: Scary-Twist
10 topic: Free writing

Winners: Topic One
1st: Anifanfreak
2nd: Cerudays

Winners: Topic two
1st: Clutch
2nd: Anifanfreak
3rd: xXItachiXx

Winners: Topic three
1st: xXitachiXx
2nd: Clutch

Winners: Topic Four
1st: Clutch
2nd: xXItachiXx

Winners: Topic Five
1st: Clutch
2nd: Riku

Winners: Topic Six
1st: Yumi
2nd: Clutch

Welp that's all I hope I have forgot about anything..knowing me I have. ._. Have fun!
Yumi~

Updated: Hi! This contest will be closed for a bit, see ya! c: ~Yumi 12/2/12
 You'll need to read every single bit of this to understand how this will work. If something is messed
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1年以上前 Cerudays said…
Ooh, I want to join! *o*
I'll have to type up a fanfiction first, but this sounds like it could be a lot of fun!
As soon as I'm done, I'll post it here.
1年以上前 Cerudays said…
Topic 1: Funny
Characters: Italy and Romano (Hetalia)
Written by: Cerudays (Me!)

Tuesdays always felt like filler days to Romano. Then again, every single day felt like a filler day, Monday through Thursday. Friday, Saturday, and Sundays were what he lived for. Days off from having to go to those stupid country meetings, where he had to sit next to people he didn’t like, and talk about things he didn’t care about. Unless they had to do with himself, of course. However, it was only Tuesday, and he was stuck having a ‘bonding day’ with his brother Italy. He supposed it was better than having an image of a certain potato-eating German burned onto his retinas, but did he really have to be stuck making pizza with his ditzy brother all day long?
“’Ay, Fratello! You’ve only put tomatoes on your pizza. It’s going to taste all boring and drab unless you don’t put anything else on it!” Romano looked up slowly over his shoulder to see his auburn haired brother staring back down on him. What a stupid smile he had. “You gotta problem wi’ that?” Romano blinked and looked over at his brother’s shoulder to his pizza, which was layered with… pasta? “Don’t you ever get tired of noodles? Yeah, I’ve caught you eatin’ ‘em at three in the morning. I see you sneakin’ in bowls during meetings.” Romano watches Italy for a moment, before his brother grinned sheepishly. “I can’t help it, fratello! At least my pizza’s better than yours.~” He turned around, and walked back over to his pizza. Romano opened his mouth to say something witty, but realized that it would just fall on deaf ears. Better pizza his foot.
Today was going to be a long day.

(Sorry if it's a little long! Hard to fit it in one paragraph.)
1年以上前 x-Yumi-x3 said…
Awesome I'm happy someone joined I'm gonna wait into more people. Join first before we start. Oka?
And I can be longer if you want to be. ( I didn't notice I repeated what I wrote up there. ^_^ embarrsing. xD)
Thanks For Joining!
1年以上前 anifanfreak said…
(I'll bite, Count Me in this thing too!)
Topic 1: Funny
Characters: Kasaru Takagaki, Rina Takagaki, Raizo Takagaki(all OC's)
Writen By: Me (I'm Making this as I go along, totally Original ((If there is any thing similar or exactly like an anime you know it is completely coincidental))

It Was a Dark Night, Like all nights, Kasaru and his Sister were going back to the house after shopping for food, Suddenly a man dressed in all black appears in front of them, "Rina Takagaki! You're Mine!" he points at Rina, Kasaru steps forward placing the groceries on the ground, he cracks his knuckles, "Plan A or B sis?" he says, "Let's go with Plan A this time." Rina Replies "Okay then, he backs up and picks up the groceries, Rina steps Behind Him and Kasaru puts his arms up to his sides "Hahahahaha! How Cute, The BRAVE older brother Protecting his sister! Fools!" The Man exclaims, "What are you going to do Kiddo?! Stare me to death?! Hahahaha!" "Nope... SHE'S Going to inflict MASSIVE pain upon you!" He jumps high in the air out of the way that a medium sized rock flies at the man with Impressive speed hitting him in the groin with a "THWACK!" The man falls to the ground crying, whimpering, and cursing under his breath, Kasaru Lands on the mans groin again, The man screams, Kasaru Dashes off, Rina follows quickly also stepping on the mans groin, unintentionally, "Hey! Kasaru-u-u-u-u! Wait for me!" The man groans lying on the ground flipping from side to side in intense pain "Damn, Damn, Damn! How could Kids trample my balls like im a base ball field?! Geez that freaking hur-r-r-r-r-rts!"
Kasaru and Rina Reach the house, Both out of breath,"Huff, huff, huff you okay Rina?" The Exhausted Kasaru manages to squeeze out, "Yeah, I'm Good, What about you?" "Fine" "Good"
Raizo comes out of the bathroom wiping his hair, he looks at Kasaru and Rina,"Hey! What happened to you two? Marathon?" Raizo laughs, Kasaru walks over to him and grips Raizo's face "Stupid pest, Just shut up... I'm Tired..." Raizo sweats a bit and says "Okay, Okay, bro! Chill! Here let me get you two some water" He runs to the kitchen and fills two glasses with cold water, "Here Drink this" "Thanks" They both say, "Kasaru, I'm Hungry What you gonna make for dinner tonight?" Raizo says, "Steak, Miso, Fish, Other stuff I forgot..." Kasaru chuckles a bit, he gets up and goes to the kitchen and starts to cook Dinner for them, suddenly. "Knock Knock" Rina Gets up and opens the door "Hello?" She looks down, It was the man that jumped Kasaru and Rina "Ugggghhhhh... help me..." He looks up "Ah... Its you..." They stare at each other in awkward silence, Rina slams the door and walks away, "Who Was it?" Kasaru Yells from the Kitchen, "Nothing! Never Mind!" She replies "Never Mind?! Is That How you treat an injured man?!" He gets up and opens the door and drags the man inside, "Oh Good God..." Rina sighs
Five Minutes later...
The man has ice bags all over his Groin area, "Damn You Kids probably ripped out one of my balls when you trampled me! What do you have to say about that?!" the man screams "Nothing, You deserved it You Immature Idiot of a man" Rina says looking away "Dude, You Just got called immature my a 15 year old! Thats pretty sad..." Raizo exclaims, Holding back laughs, The man pulls off his Cloak and reveals he is just about the same age as Kasaru, Raizo and Rina stare at him in shock Kasaru doesn't seem surprised as he checks his nails "It's True man You're an idiot... And immature... but why did you jump us anyway?" Kasaru says, "Wait a second you don't seem surprised that I'm As young as you! Why aren't you surprised?!" The Boy says "Let me just say you aren't as... mature as an adult yet... Make sense? Now answer my question" They all stare at Kasaru In disgust "Dude... Thats Just plain nasty... what the hell is wrong with you?!" The Boy says, Kasaru replies simply... "Nothing." "Both of you just shut up will you?", Rina says softly "Cause you're BOTH idiots!" She screams, They both fall on their backs, Kasaru Digs in his ear "Not so loud Geez! you might wake up the neighbors! Think about THEM!" Kasaru says in a normal voice, Rina Pinches her nose bridge shakes her head and says "Oh God this is going to be a long freaking night..."
(Sorry that this is really long! Just be happy i didn't write this in RP form! It would be like 7 times longer!)
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1年以上前 x-Yumi-x3 said…
( That's not too long what I mean by long it like a whole page, but if it's in RP forum then we'll just have to see.) Thanks 4 joining! I'll probably end Topic Funny Friday enstead of Nov 2 that's just to long to wait.
Tell more people to join!
1年以上前 xXitachiXx said…
I'm Joining in as well, I'm gonna invite one more person. &
I know I was that second juge, but this was my idea Yumi.
So I'll post my story in a min, that's in RP forum.
1年以上前 anifanfreak said…
Well Im just saying this but i live in Hawaii so i have a different time zone just say when the topics end please
1年以上前 x-Yumi-x3 said…
@anifanfreak It ends friday, new topic is Monday. And I'll have it written up there in a little bit. Hope I answered your question. So every week there's a new topic.
@ Itachi do as you please.
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1年以上前 xXitachiXx said…
I've deicided not to I'm gonna do it next week.
1年以上前 anifanfreak said…
Thank you I just ask Because I'm confused, Thanks I'll make sure I don't get mixed up again I'll likely post for the next topic also!
1年以上前 x-Yumi-x3 said…
(Sorry you guys I haven't been on it a while I've been kind of busy, with contest and stuff.)
Welcome! The new topic will start Monday! Every monday!
But you are able to start sending in your storys now!
@ Itachi Oka!

Okay the winnner is.
First: Anifanfreak
Second: Cerudays

Anifanfreak I really like you story, and thought it was really funny!
Ceruday I also really liked yours, you could have made it as long as anifreaks's.
Which I know I didn't put pacific length.
So it's more if my fauth than yours.
I hope you the the next topic for the Free Writting, it I'll much better.
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1年以上前 anifanfreak said…
(@Yumi~ You bet! And i really didn't expect to win, i was Cerudays the whole way, But Thanks, but this free writing i totally expect to win next time *Fist Pump* To tell the truth, I'm just doing this cause it's a way to express my creativity in a good way and i was right this is fun and i hope this goes as long as it can)
1年以上前 xXitachiXx said…
Sorry anifreak that isn't possible because I'll be joinin in this contest.
This one is in RP fourm.
Topic: Free Writing
Characters: Itachi, Sasori, Deidara, Naruto, Sasuke. And a lot of others.
Made by: Me.
Itachi: *Alarm goes off* Woooooaahhh!!! THEE LEGAACYYY!! born from a dream, on leather wings rose from the streets ,in the hands of destiny.*presses the snooze button*
….*rubs face, walks to the bathroom and looks in the mirror, turns on shower* *minutes later*
*walks out with a towel on*
Naruto: *walks in itachi’s room* Holy…..shi…*covers eyes* sorry Itachi ..um do you know where Sasuke is?
Itachi: *takes off towel, drys hair* *turns around* …..ohh…hello there…
Naruto: ……
Itachi: Do you need something..?
Naruto: Ohh my god….
Sasuke: *walks in* Naruto what are you…..the fuck?
Itachi: …ya know I’d love to let y’all stand here and look at my ass all day but, I’ll miss the bus, and so will you, and mother wouldn’t allow it. *puts on underwear*
*walks over and pokes Sasuke in the head* …goodbye *pushes Naruto and Sasuke out the room.*
Naruto: …S-sasuke..
Sasuke: Don’t say anything about what just happened, come on.
Naruto: alright…
Itachi: *puts on cargo shorts with a Holistor shirt on, socks and some convers.*
*puts on backpack walks out his room.*
Mother: Oh morning Itachi, have a great day at school sweetie. *kisses Itachi*
Itachi: thanks. *walks to the bus stop, on his phone, reads 8 messages* srsly?
Reads: Good Morning. (: ~Yumiko.
*Reads Next* Reads: Hey Itachi! That party was awesome!!. ~ Sasori
*next reads* Reads: Aye when are you gonna come to my house so we can do what we did the other night, babe? ~Sasori
….the fuck….
*reads next text* Reads: Oh shit! That message wasn’t for you itachi…..!~Sasori
*reads next* Unless you want it to be…. ~Sasori
reads Next* Hey can I borrow, some duck tape… Don’t ask..~Sasori.
*reads next* Hiya Itachi-kun. <3 ~Lkoyo
*reads next* ..DSFNDSJOKFNAKJJNJJDKAMSFNDAKNFJASKE ~Hidan
*reads next* Mybad..~Hidan
*Shakes his head*
Sasori: *walks over slobbing* …*staring at his phone*
Deidara: *is beside him* *rollseyes* Danna…I wish you would stop looking at that stuff.
Itachi: *peaks over and looks at his phone* o_o ….are you watching porn?
Sasori: ….*staring at his phone*
Itachi: sasori….
Sasori: …..
Itachi: SASORI!
Sasori: huh?.....what?
Itachi: *takes sas’s phone* *gets him off of pornhub* srsly your watching this in the morning? *gives phone back*
Sasori: Yes! *seeis yumiko and Lyoko walk by* Hey, hey! *pokes itachi in the cheek*
Itachi: what?!
Sasori: *points*
Itachi: *looks*
Yumiko: Hi, itachi-kun! *giggles*
Lyoko: *waves and smiles*
Sasori: *looks at there asses* You srsly did both of them?
Itachi: mhpm did I?
Sasori: I just wanna grad ther-
Deidara: grr…
Sasori: I mean …..there are clouds on the rice….
Itachi: *shakes head*
Deidara: ……*stares at sasori, in an agry way*
Sasori: Dude I’m Bisexual, I can’t help it….but I love you more dede.
Deidara: *rolls eyes*
*bus comes*
Itachi: *walks on the bus* *all the girls stare and giggle* …thinking: the hell? *sits down in an empety set.*
Sasori: *sits behind him with deidara*
*They make it to school.*
Itachi: *walks to breakfast*
Sasori: You getting breakfast dede?
Deidara: I’d rather not eat fake dirt. I’m going to class.
Sasori: alright..*walks with itachi* Hey itachi have you noticed you’ve been getting these stares.
Itachi: *hands in his pocket* I always get stares.
Sasori: No I mean ..ugh …forget it..*takes tray*
Itachi: *gets food*
Sasori: *looks at food* The fuck is this?
Itachi: Green eggs and Ham sam I am.
Sasori: shut up! Really tho..
Itachi: mhpm there pancakes.
Sasori: Ohhh…. The fuck is the syper?*eats* your gonna get your food?
Itachi: I’ll pass, *throws away* *walks to class*
Sasori: Um..Hey Itac-
Hidan: *bumps in to sasori* Hey fucker!
Sasori: Who the hell- Oh wazzuppp?
Hidan: Well I still got a fucking hang over, I stayed at passed out so long the other day. My mom thought I was dead.
Kakuza: It was irrating.
Sasori: Was it?
*Bell rings*
Sasori: SHIT! I’m late and so are y’all.
Hidan: I’m always late, who gives a fuck!
Kakaua: *holds up hall pass*
Sasori: figures, *runs* *throws food on the ground* *opens door**slowly walks in*
Teacher: Nice of you to join us today Sasori…..you are traty this is your 8th one in 2 weeks. Go to the princples office now.
Sasori: *puts backpack down* *slowly walks* damn….
Itachi: *smirks* baka….
Hidan: *walks in* *sits*
Teacher: Mr. Hidan you’ve got one more time and you will be written us as well.
Hidan: Yea yea.
Kakuza: *walks in* *puts down hall pass* *gives teacher what she asked for*
Teacher: Oh thank you Kakuza.
Kakuza: *smiles*
Teacher: Okay so today we’ll start off a new lesson on Finding the slope.
Whats the forumal for slope?
Itachi: *rasies hand* mx+b=y.
Teacher: Correct itachi!
Hidan: suck up…
Itachi: *pulls out sharingun* whatcha say?
Hidan: nothing…
Kakuza: HA!
Deidara: *is asleep*
Teacher: Now who wants to give it a try and find the slope of this graph? *looks around* ahh deidara!
You come.
Deidara: Zzz…
Teacher: *eye twitch* DEIDARA! GET YOUR GIRLY LOOKING ASS UP HERE!
Deidara: …the fuck!!
Yumiko: *laughs*
Lyoko: *yawns*he..
Deidara: *sigh* *walks to board works out problem*
Teacher: good boy.
Itachi: *is texting* Yumiko…say: Oh thanks. :3
Yumiko: *giggles* *plays with his hair* [she’s sitting right behind itachi.] Texts back: We should do it again! But only me and you this time. <3 (:
Teacher: Now show us the answer..
Deidara: Shows: >:3 :> :3:D D:t (.__.)t ArTT!
Teacher: The hell is this? *slaps deidara with a book* Go sit down.
Deidara: Oww…*falls back asleep*
Sasori: *walks in* *sits down* *wispers* Itachi looks at this shit!
Itachi: *reads* Has been written up for: Throwing food on the ground, late to class, sagging pants, cursing, touching the freshmen, and cell phone out.
Damn…
Sasori: I know! That all happened in 20 mins, besides the food they seen my throw it down earlir.
Itachi: You touched a freashmen?
Sasori: ………Well I didn’t mean to, I just wanted to see if her boobs where real…
Itachi: sasori…you really need help.
Sasori: shut up! You act like your mr. perfect.
Itachi: psh I’m far from it my friend.
Teacher: Itachi and sasori would like tell the class what ya’ll where talking abut?
Sasori: Oka..well um itachi said he wanted to fuck me so I was like hell yea and he was like oh yea I like men and I was like man I like banana’s to on top of babes licking ice cream
And then he said we need to have a 25 some wit everyone is the whole fucking class. And we could all eat the rice with mud on top if apples and have a sexy party and ass shit tho..
Whole class: ………*mouths open*
Itachi: …..
Teacher: Is that true itachi?
Itachi: No I was simply showing him how to do the slope because of what he missed out on, getting wrote up for touching children.
Teacher: ……..
*bell rings*
Teacher: Um..no homework for tonight…Thinking: god I need a vaction…
*Everyone leaves*

(Is this to long, It might seem like it but it is in RP fourm.)
x-Yumi-x3 commented…
xDDD funniest thing I've read in a while.😂 this should have won goodness. 1年以上前
1年以上前 x-Yumi-x3 said…
@Anifan I'm happy you're having fun that's one of the reasons why I made this contest. A lot of people from the other sites went crazy over my contest like this. So I got on here and thought the same thing would happen but I guess not. I expected more than 3 people. xD
But hopefully more people will come, and stay so I can keep it going.

@Itachi holy crap itachi that's a lot. I'll tell it be that much this time just because it's in RP fourm.
Thanks~
1年以上前 anifanfreak said…
(Dont count on it Itachi! ;) I'm the best writer in my school so this will be a story battle to die for)
Topic: Free Writing
Characters: Kasaru Hoshimura, Yusaku Kamioka, Yuzuru Takagami, Kyoko, a few others
Made by: ME
Kasaru: Okay well I just had the most awkward day ever...
Yusaku: Haha and what happened?
Yuzuru: Shut up Yusaku, Don't bug him! *Whacks Yusaku in the back of the head*
Kyoko: Hey guys! *She stares at Kasaru*
Kasaru: huh? *He stares at Kyoko* Hi...
Kyoko: Um... Yeah... Nothing happened right?
Kasaru: Nothing at all...
Yusaku: Did something happen that we should know about?
Yuzuru: Yeah now I'm curious, DID something happen?
Kasaru: Hey! *Turns to Yuzuru* I Thought you said not to bug me Yuzuru?!
Yuzuru: *Shrugs* I did, But i said nothing about myself. *Smirks*
Kasaru: Should i show everyone the picture? *Opens his phone and shoves it in Yuzurus face*
Yuzuru: I thought you deleted this! I swear if you do... *Cracks his knuckles*
Kyoko: What?
Kasaru: Nothin! You'll do WHAT? *Smirks evilly*
Yuzuru: *Sighs* Nothing...
Kasaru: Damn right!
Kyoko: What? *Phone rings* Huh?
Yuzuru: You didn't...
Kyoko: *Opens the phone* Omigod... What the hell is this... *Nosebleed* Eep! *Covers her nose*
Yuzuru: You DID... Ass hole! I'll kill you! *Charges Kasaru*
Kasaru: *Turns around and shoots Yuzuru in the balls with a stun gun*
Yuzuru: Oh no... No no no no no!
*BZZZZZZZZZTTT!!!*
Kasaru: Moron... *Hooks it onto a tree as it keeps going*
Yuzuru: Aaaaasssssssss hoooooollllleeeeeee......
Kasaru: Come on guys lets head home...
Kyoko: Yeah... *Wipes her nose* that was... *Flips open the phone* wow... *Nosebleed*
Kasaru: Geez are you addicted to that kind of stuff?
Kyoko: Eep! No! Of course not! I'm not addicted to looking at... *Flips open her phone* wow... *Nosebleed*
Kasaru: *Facepalm* You guys are all Idiots...
Yusaku: I just had the most awkward day of my life...
Kasaru: What are you talking about? Everyday is like this!
Yusaku: Really? I'm always about halfway home by this time...
Kasaru: Yeah i guess...
Yusaku: So what made YOUR day so awkward if you consider THAT... *Points at Yuzuru grabbing his nuts Twitching* Normal?
Kasaru: Kyoko? Should I? *Looks at her* Fuckin hell... okay she seems busy so I'll just tell you...
*FLASHBACK*
Kasaru: *Raises his hand* Teach?
Teacher: Yes?
Kasaru: May I use the Bathroom?
Teacher: Okay then, 5 minutes... Times Ticking kid!
Kasaru: Thank you! *Exits the classroom* Oh geez! *Rushes to the bathroom* Hah! *Enters the bathroom, runs past the urinals and enters the last stall, unzipping his pants, He turns around and says silently...* What the Fu...?! Kyoko?! What the hell are you doing in the guys bathroom?!
Kyoko: K-Kasaru? *IT dangles in her face* EESH!
Kasaru: GEEZ DON'T LOOK AT IT! *Pushes it back in holding in his pee, he zips back up his fly*
Kyoko: What are you doing in here?!
Kasaru: What do you mean me?! It's YOU in the guys bathroom!
Kyoko: The girls bathroom toilets are broken! We HAVE to come in here to use that bathroom!
Kasaru: Then Lock the fuckin door you idiot!
*One stall over*
Momoko: Whats the matter Kyo-chan?
Kyoko:*Outloud* O-oh nothing Momo-kun! *Silently* Get the fuck out jackass!
Kasaru: Good god! I didn't wanna see that until I was in college! *Rubs his eyes and Wobbles to a urinal and pees*
Momoko: *Exits the Stall pulling up her skirt* Hi Kasaru!
Kasaru: Hi Momoko *Turns his head to see her* Oh geez Momo! Pull up your skirt the whole way!
Momoko: Why? *Walks over and continuously Pokes Him in the face her skirt still halfway down*
Kasaru: *Boing* Oh geez *Tries to hide it*
Momoko: What? *Removes his hand* Oh my... You little perv!
Kasaru: What?! You're the one in the guys Bathroom!
Kyoko: Shut up! God!
Momoko: Still why is it like that right now? huh?
Kasaru: *Blushes* Um well... You see...
Momoko: Just as i thought! You Pervert! *Giggles, washes her hands, WELL, and exits the bathroom*
Kyoko: What happened? *Looks down* Oh geez... *Nosebleed* wha... *Keeps staring*
Kasaru: Stop staring! Geez! its embarrassing! *Blushes even more* Finally done! *Zips it up*
Kyoko: It was so big and bushy... *More blood gushes from her nose as she becomes a bright red*
Kasaru: Whatever... I Doubt that was the first one you've seen... was it?
Kyoko: *Gulps and Nods, not moving her body*
Kasaru: *Jaw drops* what the fuck Kyo... I'm going back to the class, you comin or what?
Kyoko: *Gulps and nods, turns around and walks out*
Kasaru: *Looks at the ground where she was standing* what the... *It was her skirt* Geez *Kicks it into the hallway and down the hall* So no one gets the wrong idea...
Kyoko: *Enters the room still in shock*
Whole class: *Jawdrop*
Teacher: K-Kyoko... Where the hell is your skirt...?
Kyoko: *Ignores the teacher and sits down, everyone staring at her* huh?
Teacher: Where the hell... Is your SKIRT?!
Kyoko: Oh... Near the bathroom...
Whole class: *Jaws hit the floor*
Teacher: Go get it then... NOW!
Kyoko: *Gets up and walks out* okay...
Momoko: Kyoko? What are you doing without your skirt on? *Slaps her face continuously*
Kyoko: *Snaps out of it after 5 slaps but Momoko doesn't stop*Ow ow ow ow ow ow ow ow ow ow ow ow ow ow STOP!
Momoko: Kay... *Stops*
Kyoko: *Looks down* EESH! What happened?! And you! You're skirt is half down!
Momoko: Oh it is? *Pulls it up* I NEVER noticed! *Giggles*
Kyoko: *Stares at her in shock* Okay... *Looks down the hall and sees her skirt* EESH! *Runs and gets it, pulling it on quickly* Whew... I Hope nothing embarrassing happened...
Momoko: You okay? Did you see it? That why you were like that?
Kyoko: *Blushes as steam comes out of her head* Y-yeah...
Momoko: Haha I wasn't shocked, Though it was bigger than most I've seen...
Kasaru: God... That was just embarrassing... *Enters the room*
Teacher: Kasaru! You ran out of time a long time ago! What the hell we're you doing?!
Kasaru: I'm sorry sir, Please forgive me! *Bows*
*Back to the present*
Kasaru: Thats pretty much what happened...
Yusaku: Tough second Period... could you eat lunch after that?
Kasaru: Well I still have my appetite after frying Yuzurus balls everyday... so yeah...
Kyoko: *Closes her phone* What're we talkin about? *Runs up behind them*
Kasaru: *Doesn't look back* Nose...
Kyoko: *Wipes her nose* Dumbass...
Momoko: Finally get here you guys?
Kasaru:... um... hi?
Momoko: What's up? *Walks up to him*
Kasaru: Nothin' you?
Momoko: Nothin much...
Yusaku: hey um... I heard about what happened... and I'm out of here... You guys work your shit out without me kay? see ya! *Runs off*
Kasaru: You ass hole... See ya! *Runs off* Ugh... *Thinks* Why am i running? oh right... I dont wanna get raoed at such an early age my a girl thats younger than me! God Some one shoot me...
*Kaboom!*
(You like? May not be JUST al long as Itachis but its pretty freaking long this was what i meant by it being shit long if we write it in RP format)
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1年以上前 x-Yumi-x3 said…
I just read both of your storys ...wow xD I've never laughed so much.
This is gonna be very hard.. >.<
1年以上前 anifanfreak said…
(Okay But like I said I really don't care if i win or not! Im just here for fun! but first whos do you think was more Explicit, messed up and/or just plain weird/awkward?)
Please Note: I'm only 13 years old
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1年以上前 x-Yumi-x3 said…
Anifan: ((Off topic)) Do you care if I give you a nick name? )) Anyways yours was probably more explicit, but I love storys like that, trust me! Considering I read yaoi. xD
Itachi's: I've read one of his storys before, that was probably one of the least explicit one I've ever read of his storys. But that still was tho. Itachi's story was werid but then both of them where weird.
They weren't awkward, or messed up. More funny than anything.
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1年以上前 anifanfreak said…
(Yumi: Okay lol and no idc if you give me a nick name, most of my friends call me AFF, no it doesnt also stand for " A Fucking Faggot" and You seriously read Yaoi? That stuffs just messed up, considering my age i thought that the story was more awkward cause i just made it up as i went along)
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1年以上前 x-Yumi-x3 said…
(Okay kool I'll call you AFF, yes I read yaoi .xDD
& and I don't think it matters about your age.
It was a awesome story how long did it take you to write it?
1年以上前 anifanfreak said…
(Ummm... I DID go along as i went so... 3... 4 minutes... not too long... I'm a writer for my school newspapers... Damn club members ditched me so i have to do EVERYTHING -_-" Jerks...)
1年以上前 xXitachiXx said…
Cool story bro. ^^
1年以上前 x-Yumi-x3 said…
Haha that sucks but at Least you like to writting yes?
HAPPY FREAKING HALLOWEEN!
 Haha that sucks but at Least あなた like to writting yes? HAPPY FREAKING HALLOWEEN!
1年以上前 anifanfreak said…
You Bet!! I'm on my 4th book, i haven't gotten any officially published yet though! and thanks itachi ^^...
1年以上前 x-Yumi-x3 said…
Cool you write I hope I can read it one day. :o
1年以上前 anifanfreak said…
Yeah i might make a forum and post my story for feedback and comments on my book
1年以上前 x-Yumi-x3 said…
That'd be awesome.
I'm still trying to figure out, who to pick.
*sigh* Guess I'll need some help.
1年以上前 anifanfreak said…
Well if you need help Ill ask one of my friends!
He'll be honest If he doesnt pick me Its alright Itachi did warn me after all!
1年以上前 Clutch13 said…
Ok I'm calling my lazy card, but I wanna introduce an O.C. named Jemuzu Kuratchi to well... whoever hasn't heard of him. I wrote 5 parts to his story so far seperate from the RP I use him in (see Random Anime RP forums) This is part 1. So if we're still in free writing... Here goes nothing.

Derek held Ashuri close and they watched a red sun sink into the California horizon.

Ashuri: Promise me that whatever happens... You'll always be with me...

Derek: I give you my word... I will always be with you (Kisses Ashuri) No matter what. We face the world together.

Ashuri narrating: I believed him... Every word he said... That was one of the happiest momments of my life. But... It would all soon end... Jemuzu... If you could only hear me... *sigh* My son.

One year later...
Ashuri exits the clinic and gets into a blue pickup truck.

Derek: Hey babe! How'd everything go...
Ashuri: Fine...
Derek: Well what was it! Ya been pukin' up every other morning and sh*t! I ain't picking it up.
Ashuri: You never do... I always do the cleaning.
Derek: You know why Ashuri!?! Cause I bust my @$$ 10 hours a day!
Ashuri: I know! Gawd the same speech with you! Whatever happened to face the world together Derek?
Derek: You know something?
Ashuri: What?
Derek: You're very ungrateful, you know that!
Ashuri: Ungrateful!?!
Derek: Yes! Ungrateful!
Ashuri: Pull over...
Derek: Huh?
Ashuri: Pull over and let me out!
Derek: *Shrugs* Fine. (pulls truck to the side of the road)
Ashuri: Ungrateful... Let's see who makes your dinner tonight.
Derek: Eeeehhhh!!! Walk home then, ya b****, who needs you.
Ashuri gets out of the truck.
Ashuri: You're an @$$hole.
Derek: Really!?! We all got one... Dumb F'n b****!
Ashuri gives Derek the middle finger as he drives off. Ashuri starts walking down the road...

Ashuri Narrating: I went to my mother's place for the night. I told her about the check-up. I was fine, but I was also pregnant... I couldn't tell Derek... He had a hard enough time covering our rent... and his bar tab. My mother told me to leave him so many times... Still, I stayed with him. I went home the next day... He was gone... Then came August 5th 1981... The happiest day in my life... Jemuzu...

Nurse: He's a big kid Ashuri. 9 lbs 4 oz.
(The nurse hands Ashuri the baby) What's his name?
Ashuri: I'm naming him after my grandfather... Jemuzu... Jemuzu Kuratchi.

Ashuri Narrating: My mother convinced me to take Derek to court for child support... I would've had to soon enough, but really I just wanted to forget him all together... The court date came but he never showed. He never showed! That's when I noticed an add in the newspaper... I had never seen it there before, but the print was clear as day. It read "Your bitterness, I will dispell" and a wierd phone number below it... So strange... It only had six didgits. But I called it anyway...

Operator: We're sorry, but the number you're trying to call, has been disconnected.
Ashuri: Figures...(rolls eyes) Probally just some punk kids pulling a prank with their lunch money.(Shakes her head and turns around. Her eyes widen)

Ashuri: Who are you?
Ai: My name is Ai.
Ashuri: How did you get in? *thinking to herself*I'm sure I locked the doors, I didn't hear a window open.
Ai: You called me...
Ashuri: That number!?!
Ai hands her a black wicker doll with a red string tied around it's neck.
Ai: Take this. If you truely wish revenge, untie the scarlet thread from the dolls neck. I will ferry the soul of your oppressor immediately to hell.
Ashuri: To hell!?! (Looks at Jemuzu in the crib)
Ai: However...
Ashuri looks back at Ai.
Ai: By untying the thread, you will enter into a covenant with me. Your soul must also go to hell.
Ashuri: Hell...
Ai: That's not till after you die, of course.
Ashuri: I... I... I have to think about it.
Ai dissapears
Ashuri: Hell...
Ai's voice: The decision rests with you.
Ashuri picks up the phone to call her mother, but no one answers... Suddenly, there's a bang on the front door.
Ashuri hangs up phone and walks up to the door.
Ashuri: Who is it!?!
The door is suddenly kicked in, knocking Ashiru to the ground.
Derek: Honey! I came back!
Ashuri: Derek! (notices a half empty 40 oz in his hand)
Derek:(grabs Ashuri by the hair) So babe!.. I get this letter in the mail! and guess what!?!
Ashuri: Leave me alome!
Derek: I'm a daddy aparantly!!!
Ashiru: Please just go away! You f*ckin' drunk @$$hole!!!
Derek throws her to the ground and takes another swig on the bottle.
Derek: Drunk!!! (Breaks the bottle against the table.) I'm thinking more clear than ever baby!!! Speaking of baby...
Ashuri: No!!!
Derek: Where is the little sh*t bastard!?!
Ashuri: Leave him alone!!!!!
Derek sees the crib.
Derek: There ya are!!! (Walks to the crib)
Ashuri runs and grabs Derek, trying to hold him back.
Ashuri: Please just leave him alone!!!
Derek:(Stabs Ashuri repeatedly with the broken bottle) Get off me you b****!!!!
Ashuri falls to the ground, blood soaking her t-shirt...
Derek: What a pretty baby!!!!
Ashuri pulls out the straw doll.
Ashuri: I'm sorry Jemuzu...(tears up) I'm so sorry.
Derek raises the broken bottle ready to strike... Just then he suddenly dissapears and the bottle falls to the floor.
Ashuri: I'm so sorry Jemuzu...(Closses her teared up eyes.)

Looking on through a window are Ai, Ichimoku, Waynudo, and Hone Onna.
Waynudo: Poor kid...
Hone Onna: Yeah, talk about a rough start to life.
Ichimoku: So miss, what should we do about him?
Ai: His suffering will give him strength.
Ichimoku: Miss?
Ai: We're going home now.
Waynudo: As you wish Miss.
(They all dissapear)

A dark shadow comming from nowhere casts over the crib.

Dakuaisu's voice: My, my, little one. How unfortunate.
Jemuzu starts crying.
Dakuaisu: I know... Don't worry little Jemuzu... I'm here for you. hehehehe.
The shadow dissapears and police enter the house.
Officer 1: Oh my god...
Officer 2:(Sees the crib) Sir! There's a baby here!
Walkie Radio: *static* Car 22... We have the same call comming in two blocks from your location *static* The two addresses' residents... have the same last name...
Officer 2: (looks at Jemuzu) It's gonna be ok... We'll find someone to take care of you...
Jemuzu puts his little hands over his ears, and starts crying...
1年以上前 x-Yumi-x3 said…
AFF we do need another juge see if she's help.
And you liked Itachi's story?
Clutch Thanks for joining!
You guys will probably know who won Saturday or Sunday.
1年以上前 anifanfreak said…
Um Yumi... Clutch is the one i asked To help judge, but i can ask some other friends... Turns out he wanted to share his story... Stupid me i just gave myself more competition... I want people to read my stories... *Pout*
And of course I like Itachis story... I only thought it was... well... messed up... Honestly it woulda been fine if Sasori wasnt like that... But i wasnt saying im FOR itachis story, look at what he said in the beginning of his story Yumi, Thats what i mean by "He did warn me after all!"
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1年以上前 x-Yumi-x3 said…
Oh. >.< well I do have other people that I can juge it. You don't have to find anyone. lol
And also I like it when there's a lot of people.
And I really loved itachi's story. xD
It was funny, both of you guys did write it in topic funny so, I guess the things y'all think is funny is different.
*shrugs*
I have everything under control now.
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1年以上前 anifanfreak said…
Actually... I Didn't intend it to be funny or nothin... I just wanted to write somethin... Seein as i've just watched High School DxD and i read Itachis story i guess i needed to get something Ecchi off my mind, call it "Writen Relief" if you would...
Nice ta know you got everything under control so Keep up the great hosting Yumi!
*Smile*
1年以上前 x-Yumi-x3 said…
Haha thanks! (:
I haven't read Clutch's story yet, I got sleepy.
Hopefully I'll have time to read it today so I can see who won, >.< I'm always so
busy. *:D*
1年以上前 xXitachiXx said…
Lol y'all thought my story was ecchi? Well I can see why, there's actually many parts to it that was only the begining. Which Yumiko knows because she's read all of them.
I put the way the charaters act with the person who cosplays or RPs as that person.
It's more of a mixture with the chatacter also.
Althought the way sasori acts I went over board with his personailty. He doesn't really act like that
he isn't Bi either, but once I got finished and all of my friends read the story they loved it.
As Yumiko said the things that we think is funny is different.
Soo I'll kool it down with the I guess the ecchi and stuff for the next story.
& plus I had wrote that story a long time ago; so I'll have to write one for the next topic which is
sad and I haven't wrote a sad story before so I kind of can't wait.
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1年以上前 Clutch13 said…
If you want I can judge. Just forget I ever posted. It can just... be there. idk.
1年以上前 x-Yumi-x3 said…
Itachi haha there wasn't reallyy any eechi I don't think. C:

The winner is.
1st. Clutch
2nd. AFF
3rd. Itachi

Clutch, your story was awesome I loved everything about it; great job
Is there more?

AFF I also loved your story, there where many parts I laughed at.
Clutch's story was a bit ahead of yours.

Itachi you already know I loved your story but you go 3rd because
there storys was a step ahead of yours.

Now lets get ready for topic 3: Sad.
You can start sending it in now but it starts Monday.
Thanks!
Yumi~
1年以上前 x-Yumi-x3 said…
No clutch stay in I got it.
You already won so, get ready for the next topic.
1年以上前 Clutch13 said…
Yeah, there's four more parts so far but they might not fit the topics at the time so, yeah. But if the topic fits, I'll use the different parts I've written from it. a.k.a. Clutch's lazy cards XD.
1年以上前 x-Yumi-x3 said…
xD Awesome! well you can write different story for the this topic then. :3
1年以上前 Clutch13 said…
(A grown up Jemuzu Kuratchi)
 (A grown up Jemuzu Kuratchi)
1年以上前 Clutch13 said…
Ok I'm done. Me and my damn O.C.'s... My brain just keeps giving birth to all these frickin anime characters... Idk, but here goes... This story takes place in 1985 at the height of the cold war... I call it... "For the stars, stripes, and the sickel in my heart"
A man sits in a hotel room by himself. He stands up at the foot of his bed, and walks over to the window and looks outside at a snow covered town called Nessebar in Bulgaria. The man let out a low sigh and went back to his bed, put on a set of headphones and hit play on a small tape recorder...
Over the headphones:*female voice* Only the farmer can bale the hay.
Man: Don't you know a sickel is useful to a farmer? *a green light flashes on the recorder*
Over the headphones:*female voice* Thank you for your confirmation Mr. Waters... Here is your briefing... *male voice* Hello Robert... Your mission involves the suspected Soviet double agent, Nikeeva Mickovich... To make a long story short, the title of "suspected" does not apply any more. We traced the bug you planted on her all the way to Tehran and then to Moscow itself... I don't need to tell you how bad this is Rob... If she gave them any information about Orbit Shield... The Soviets may turn this cold war into an inferno... As you know Her last known location was Nessebar... And if you're hearing this recording, then that means you've succesfully located her... Your first objective is complete... Now, objective number 2... Kill Nikeeva Mickovich, and gather any information you can from her computer and bring it home... Is that understood?
Robert: *long pause* Yes sir...
Over the headphones: *male voice* Very good... Good luck Mr. Waters.
Robert:*takes off the headphones* I don't want the luck. (takes the tape out, sets it on fire and puts it in an ash tray) Please Nikeeva... Be better at your job than I am at mine... (grabs a pistol from his suitcase, attaches a silencer, sticks it under his shirt, and walks out the door...)

1 year earlier...
Robert and a girl are the only 2 passengers on a C-130...
Robert: Nikeeva?
Nikeeva: What is it Robert?
Robert: Have you ever thought of just... Not doing this anymore?
Nikeeva: Why would I stop doing what I am good at darling?
Robert: Well... Wouldn't it be nice if we, I mean... Wouldn't it be nice to just leave this all behind, raise a family? Do something different? Be... normal...
Nikeeva: *smiles, stands up and walks over to Robert* I like you because you're not normal *kisses him*
Robert: Nikeeva, I'm serious... We can retire together... Be together...
Nikeeva: I no see a ring on this finger my friend...

back to 1985...
Robert walks down the snow covered street and as he walks he ruffles through his coat pocket and pulls out a small case and opens it. He stops and stares at it for a moment... A ring of gold with a large diamond on top...
Robert:*whispers* It's been a year.

Back on the plane a year earlier...
Nikeeva: Well? *holds out her hand*
Robert:*chuckles and takes out a ring pop* Here... Consider it my guarantee to you.
Nikeeva:*lol* Guarantee!?! Robert, it's a ring pop!
Robert: I know *chuckles* But In one year... I'll give you a real ring... I guarantee it...
Nikeeva: *smiles* Ok... I'm gonna hold you to that.

1985....
Robert stands outside a beat up house, looks down, then kicks in the door, and runs inside... Nikeeva is sitting on a chair in the opposet corner aiming a gun at Robert's head.
Nikeeva: Hello Robert...
Robert:*turns around* Nikeeva...
Nikeeva:*tears up and puts her gun down* I missed you *runs to Robert and hugs him*
Robert: *hugs Nikeeva back. He bites his bottom lip as his eyes fill up with tears* Nikeeva... Do you remember what I told you a year ago?
Nikeeva:*smiles and walks to her dresser, opens the top drawer and pulls out the ring to a ring pop.* How could I forget?
Robert:*pulls out the small box* Nikeeva Mickovich... *opens the box* Will you be my wife?
Nikeeva: Yes... Yes I will... *hugs him and they both kiss*

The next morning, Robert and Nikeeva get inside a car and drive off...
Nikeeva: So... Where do we go?
Robert:*long pause* Paradise...
Nikeeva: Robert what's wrong?
Robert turns the car suddenly to a large field.
Nikeeva: Robert! What are you doing!?!
Robert slams the brakes and quickly points the silenced gun at Nikeeva's head.
Robert: Why Nikeeva?
Nikeeva looks at Robert with a frown that starts to cross her face...
Robert: Orbit shield Nikeeva... Why?
Nikeeva: They sent you... Of all people they assigned me to you... *begins to sob*
Robert:*starts choking up* Even if it wasn't me... You knew you couldn't escape the C.I.A...
Nikeeva: It's my job... *wipes her eyes*
Robert: And you did it well my love... *pulls the trigger and Nikeeva's head falls into his lap* I'm so sorry... But this is the only way... They would of caught us Nikeeva *sobs and shuts her eyes* I gotta do my job too... *notices a piece of paper poking out of her coat* What's this?
The letter is in Russian... But Robert knows the language like the back of his hand.
Robert: Oh my god... Nikeeva... Why didn't you tell me? Nikeeva...? Why didn't you let me know!?! *puts his gun to his head and pulls the trigger*

The blood splatters on the letter... A letter that reads the following...

Dear comrades,
I'm sorry to report my failure in my mission to obtain the details on Orbit Shield... This has weighed heavily on my consience... I have failed the KGB... and the Union of Soviet Socialist Republics. I have already destroyed any and all files on my computer. Your secrets are safe. I hearby announce that I willingly have decided to resign from the KGB...
-Sincerly... FMR Major General Nikeeva Mickovich.
1年以上前 anifanfreak said…
I have a story but its a part of my book, i dont think im going to post it, Ill help jusdge this round, but count me in for Topic 3! I'll be fair and if i like your story ill post it and give you props, Aside from Yumi, Cause I think you would deserve it, So go for the double!
1年以上前 x-Yumi-x3 said…
Your gonna juge and do topic 3?
1年以上前 anifanfreak said…
No Im going to POST for topic 4 but JUDGE for topic 3, Im not posting for topic 3, okay?
1年以上前 x-Yumi-x3 said…
Oh oka just got a little confused.
1年以上前 x-Yumi-x3 said…
Usually AFF I wouldn't allow you to just become a juge, just cause you wanted to but considering no one besides me have juged. I'll let you, I let other people be a juges so when I'm not on they can take over ,but not a lot of people fanpop like to write storys as much as other people on other sites.
So I want have a problem like that.
1年以上前 anifanfreak said…
Yeah we need other judges so thats why i volunteered to do it, if you didnt allow me i just wouldnt have posted, idc either way...
1年以上前 xXitachiXx said…
I'm not done with my story yet it should be done Wednesday probably.
1年以上前 x-Yumi-x3 said…
Itachi@ Oka.
Aff@ No I said I'll let you, I was just telling you.